I will provide a comprehensive developmental edit of your novel

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

Canada

I speak English

813 orders completed

Developmental, Copy and Stylistic Editor

Complex magic systems need a second look? Family trees missing a branch? Political landscapes snarled up? Let's untangle them together. As the director and developmental editor at Plotwise, I'm not j...
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  • Book Editing

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About this Gig

Vetted Pro

I'm a professionally trained developmental, copy and stylistic editor with seven years in the publishing sphere. As a full-time editor with literary agency experience, I am confident I can help you strengthen your work.


Bonus areas I include in each developmental edit:


  • market research (competition, title use, etc.)
  • marketing tips (for self/trad-publishing)
  • tips for querying literary agents (where to find them, how to write a query letter, etc.)
  • next steps (where do you go from here?)
  • general publishing tips


A developmental edit includes a rigorous assessment of the following areas:


  • the craft of writing (writing mechanics, logic, clarity, readability)
  • plot/subplots
  • proper use of exposition, interiority, description, and dialogue (+ tags and action beats)
  • pacing
  • act structure
  • characterization/character arcs
  • narrative voice
  • correct use of point(s) of view (omniscient vs. limited, etc.)
  • genre-specific requirements


I promise a friendly experience while ensuring your manuscript adheres to industry-standard guidelines.

Language:

English

Genre:

Literary fiction

Science fiction

Fantasy

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Reviews

131 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.8
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    des_terrezza

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    United States

    5

    Working with Amy was an absolute pleasure. She is commutative, transparent and has incredible attention to detail. From inconsistencies in pacing to subtle word choice issues, she caught everything- completely thorough from in-line comments to the editorial letter. She not only edits, but you can learn...

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    3 months

    Duration

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    cramer2480

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Amy is exceptional. She has a deep understanding of what makes a story succeed or fail and she details both in the Developmental Editing analysis she provides. Amy goes above and beyond that, providing detailed notes within the body of the manuscript. Amy's insights and suggestions have made my manuscript...

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

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    obrien1103

    US

    United States

    5

    Amy was great to work with on a developmental edit of my prologue. She definitely pointed out some great things and helped me streamline this opening of the book.

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    authoryoungpark

    US

    United States

    4

    It was a good experience overall. She showed me where I need to improve in my manuscript. It was a good learning experience.

    $600-$800

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    brenxkie

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Amy was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. She didn't just catch structural issues, she understood the story I was trying to tell and helped me see how to tell it better. Her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and delivered with genuine care for the work. She went above...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

131 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(124)
(5)
(1)
(1)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.8
Sort By
Most relevant
  • D
    image-docs

    des_terrezza

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Amy was an absolute pleasure. She is commutative, transparent and has incredible attention to detail. From inconsistencies in pacing to subtle word choice issues, she caught everything- completely thorough from in-line comments to the editorial letter. She not only edits, but you can learn...

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    3 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    cramer2480

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Amy is exceptional. She has a deep understanding of what makes a story succeed or fail and she details both in the Developmental Editing analysis she provides. Amy goes above and beyond that, providing detailed notes within the body of the manuscript. Amy's insights and suggestions have made my manuscript...

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • O
    image-docs

    obrien1103

    US

    United States

    5

    Amy was great to work with on a developmental edit of my prologue. She definitely pointed out some great things and helped me streamline this opening of the book.

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    authoryoungpark

    US

    United States

    4

    It was a good experience overall. She showed me where I need to improve in my manuscript. It was a good learning experience.

    $600-$800

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B
    image-docs

    brenxkie

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Amy was one of the best decisions I made for my manuscript. She didn't just catch structural issues, she understood the story I was trying to tell and helped me see how to tell it better. Her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and delivered with genuine care for the work. She went above...

    $800-$1,000

    Price

    4 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No