I will professionally beta read and critique your romantasy

You don't know what you don't know, because you're too close to your own work.

I will:

• provide honest reader reactions
• check for inconsistencies, repetitiveness, wordiness, and redundancy (and suggest alternatives)
• think about your characters as much, or more, than you (really!)
• envision your world as you have written it, and help you bring it to life

Sample Read

I'll read 5,000 words or less. You get in-line commentary with actionable feedback.

Gentle Read

No shade if you are a tender soul. Writing is vulnerable labor and we're not all ready to accept the lashing that can come from an unrestrained readership. In this package, I'll hit on the big things and leave the details for another day. True progress often comes from baby steps, and I want to take those steps with you.

No Nonsense Read

I will comment on everything I see that is out of place, doesn't make sense, or that I have a question about, including if:

• your opening chapter gets my attention or if it needs major work
• your character is over-reacting
• you're using cryptic language
• you are being cliché

I wont be rude, but I wont hold back. You will get feedback that will elevate your manuscript to the next level of editing.