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I will beta read and critique your manuscript
About this Gig
Hi, I'm Akanni Your Story's First Ideal Reader
Before you spend hundreds on editing, you need one thing: an honest reader's perspective. You're too close to your manuscript to see its blind spots. That's where I come in.
I've helped fiction authors (romance, fantasy, sci-fi, thriller, YA) transform good drafts into unputdownable stories. My job isn't grammar it's experience. I tell you what works, what doesn't, and why.
What You'll Get
- Complete manuscript read with in-line comments
- Detailed reader's report covering: plot holes, pacing, character depth, dialogue, and emotional impact
- Honest pros & cons list
- Kind, constructive feedback (I never crush spirits _ I build you up)
My Process
- I read like your target audience would
- You receive actionable feedback within 10 days
- I answer any follow-up questions
Why Choose Me?
- Fast turnaround
- Genre specialist
- 100% confidential
- 5-star service Authors keep coming back
Before Ordering
Let me know your genre, specific concerns, and deadline. I'll confirm I'm the right fit for your story.
Ready for Honest Feedback?
Click "Order Now" or message me - I'd love to hear about your book!
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Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What's the difference between a beta reader and an editor?
Great question! An editor focuses on line-level corrections, grammar, and technical fixes. I focus on the reader's experience, plot, pacing, characters, and emotional impact. Think of me as your test audience before you invest in professional editing.
Do you proofread or copy edit?
I'll flag major, repeated errors or confusing sentences, but my primary focus is big-picture feedback. If you spot a typo in my feedback, feel free to ignore it, I'm here for your story, not grammar perfection.
Will you be mean about my writing?
Never. I'm honest but kind. My goal is to help you improve, not discourage you. I'll always highlight what's working before addressing what needs work.
How do I send my manuscript?
Google Docs is preferred because it's easiest for in-line comments, but I also accept Microsoft Word and PDF. Just share the link or upload the file after ordering.
What if I don't agree with your feedback?
That's totally fine! Feedback is subjective. Take what's helpful and leave what's not. I'm just one reader offering my honest perspective, you're always the final decision-maker for your story.
Can you read work that's not in English?
yes, I read manuscripts not written in English.
Do you offer rush delivery?
Absolutely! Contact me before ordering, and I'll see if I can accommodate your timeline.
What information do you need from me?
just your genre, word count, target audience, and any specific concerns you have. The more you tell me, the more targeted my feedback will be!
