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I will developmentally edit your book
Thorough But Kind Story Editor and Writer
All work is done 100% by me—no AI used, ever.
Hi, I’m Jen!
I adore the written word and read 100–200 books a year across many genres. Plus I have worked on over 300 projects.
Let me use my broad kno...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
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Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Developmental Editing: Make Your Story Amazing
All editing is done 100% by me no AI, ever.
Do you need concrete, actionable advice to turn your manuscript into a story readers cant put down?
A developmental edit isnt about grammar or mechanics its about the story itself. Ill help you strengthen the heart of your book so readers stay up all night, desperate to know what happens next.
What I focus on:
Theme and emotional core
Story elements: hook, premise, characters, structure, pacing
World-building that feels rich and believable
Craft issues like head-hopping, POV consistency, and more
Smart use of tropes while giving readers the fresh twist they crave
What's included:
In-manuscript comments
Detailed editorial report
One-hour private discussion session
Rate is $50 per 10000 words.
My feedback is always supportive and encouraging.
I work on any genre and am completely non-judgmental. I have the deepest experience in Historical Fiction, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Romance, Suspense, and Mysteries.
Proud member of the Editorial Freelancers Association.
Ready to make your story the best it can be? Message me with your word count and genre for a fast, friendly quote!
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Can I see a sample of your work?
Sure just ask:)
What genres do you work in?
All fiction and certain types of nonfiction. I have the most knowledge of historical fiction, sci-fi/fantasy, romance, suspense, mysteries, general fiction and memoirs.
Will you sign my NDA?
Yes.
Will you fix my spelling, punctuation, grammar, phrasing?
This is not the right gig for that, Please see my other listings or contact me for a custom quote that combines everything.
What if I need it faster?
Contact me and we can adjust your order.
Can I get a discount if you've already looked at it?
Sure just contact me for a custom quote.
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V veya_kade
United States
It has been a pleasure working with Jen so far. She is quick, efficient, personable. You can't beat her pricing for the level of effort and recommendations she gives. I love how down-to-earth she is. Jen is just a lot of fun to work with. We still have some work to do (changes that need made on my part)...
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?N nripsman
United States
Order Canceled
She never completed the order and didn't respond to my messages. After she was two weeks late, I cancelled the order. I was very disappointed.
Up to $50
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3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M mymadamepoetess
United States
Jen has helped me immensely in understanding what I could do to get my novel to the next place! I will refer her to all my writer friends.
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S sillyplan2
United States
Careful reading which gave me some really good suggestions on where to take the story next!
$50-$100
Price
13 days
Duration
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Helpful?R redmarsh123
United States
Jen was incredible. Her friendliness, level of cooperation, and collaboration was superb. I couldn't happier as a customer and as a fellow human being. Jen is the best! Please hire her right now! I'll know if you don't.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
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20 reviews for this Gig
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
V veya_kade
United States
It has been a pleasure working with Jen so far. She is quick, efficient, personable. You can't beat her pricing for the level of effort and recommendations she gives. I love how down-to-earth she is. Jen is just a lot of fun to work with. We still have some work to do (changes that need made on my part)...
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?N nripsman
United States
Order Canceled
She never completed the order and didn't respond to my messages. After she was two weeks late, I cancelled the order. I was very disappointed.
Up to $50
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M mymadamepoetess
United States
Jen has helped me immensely in understanding what I could do to get my novel to the next place! I will refer her to all my writer friends.
Up to $50
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S sillyplan2
United States
Careful reading which gave me some really good suggestions on where to take the story next!
$50-$100
Price
13 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?R redmarsh123
United States
Jen was incredible. Her friendliness, level of cooperation, and collaboration was superb. I couldn't happier as a customer and as a fellow human being. Jen is the best! Please hire her right now! I'll know if you don't.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
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