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I will provide script notes hollywood verified
About this Gig
Looking for script coverage that actually helps you make the story better not just a checklist?
I'm a produced writer/director. I wrote and directed Billy Knight, starring Al Pacino, releasing in theaters this year. I directed Zero Star: The Cam Ward Story, streaming on Tubi, and produced Desert Road, which premiered at SXSW. I've spent years reading scripts for producers and financiers I know what makes an executive keep reading, and what makes them pass on page 10.
What you get:
- A clear read on structure, character arcs, dialogue, and pacing
- Honest notes on what's working and what's holding the script back
- A marketability take: how this reads to buyers, financiers, or festivals
- Specific, actionable feedback not vague praise
My process: send your script as a PDF, tell me where you are in the process and what kind of notes you want, and I'll deliver detailed, professional coverage on your selected timeline.
Whether you're prepping to send this to reps, refining before a festival submission, or just want a sharp outside read before your next rewrite, I'll give you the kind of notes I'd want on my own scripts.
Send it over let's make it better.
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English
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FAQ
What formats do you accept?
PDF only, please — industry standard formatting (Final Draft/Fountain export to PDF works great).
Do you cover TV pilots and shorts, not just features?
Yes — features, pilots, shorts, and treatments all work. Just note the format when you send it over.
Will you tell me if my script is "good"?
I'll give you an honest, specific read on what's working and what isn't — not just a yes/no. That's more useful than a verdict.
Do you offer rewriting or ghostwriting services?
Yes- However rates and details to discussed.
