I will critique and proofread your story

Hi there,

After working tirelessly on your manuscript, you are now in the final stages to polish it and make it the best it can be for your future readers. I'm here to provide you with honest and constructive feedback to help you revise your manuscript for publication.

I will proofread and provide in-line comments of my reactions, opinions, and observations as I comb through your story. I will provide an in-depth report at the end with my overall feedback and analysis. All edits will be made with track changes in word.

My critique will focus on:

• Structure
• Theme
• Plot
• World Building
• Character Development
• Conflict and resolution
• Character likability
• Tension and rhythm
• Flow
• Dialogue (Is it natural or forced)
• Tone
• OR anything else I may notice

As a writer and published author myself, I enjoy reading all types of fiction: Paranormal, science fiction, fantasy, horror, adventure, thriller, mystery, erotica, etc.

Please message me before placing your order so we can discuss the package that best fits your needs.

I will happily critique and proofread your first THREE chapters completely FREE to ensure we are a good match before you purchase this gig.*

-Alessia-