I will beta read your manuscript
About this Gig
Get detailed, professional structural feedback on your story from a published writer with an MFA in Creative Writing.
Reading your own manuscript objectively is almost impossible. As an experienced writer and editor with a Masters degree in Creative Writing, I provide comprehensive, constructive feedback to help you elevate your manuscript before query submission or self-publishing.
What I focus on in every critique:
- Plot & Pacing: Tension, structural consistency, plot holes, and narrative momentum.
- Characterization: Arc plausibility, voice distinction, depth, and motivation.
- Worldbuilding & Scene Craft: Immersion, dialogue rhythm, and show-vs-tell balance.
- Reader Experience: Emotional engagement, chapter hooks, and honest reader reactions.
What you will receive:
- A detailed In-Depth Reader's Report (310 pages depending on word count) breaking down strengths, areas of improvement, and actionable solutions.
- Line-by-line reactions/comments directly on your manuscript (upon request).
Note: This service focuses on story mechanics, structure, and characterization. If you need line editing or proofreading, check out my editing gig!
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Fanfiction
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Will you correct my grammar or typos in this service?
No. Beta reading focuses on high-level narrative mechanics—plot structure, character arcs, pacing, worldbuilding, and reader engagement. If you need typos, punctuation, or grammar corrected, please check my Copy Editing & Proofreading gig!
What format should I send my manuscript in?
I accept .doc, .docx, or Google Docs links. Please ensure the text is fully accessible and editable so I can leave marginal notes if requested.
Do you accept manuscripts in both English and Spanish?
Yes! I am fully bilingual and offer structural reader reports for stories written in either English or Spanish.
Do you read explicit/NSFW content or specific genres?
I read most fiction and non-fiction genres (fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thrillers, literary fiction), that includes any type of content (explicit/NSFW). However, I do request a content warning beforehand in case of graphic shock content or hate speech.

