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I will give developmental feedback on your first chapters
About this Gig
Your opening chapters are your first impression and they need to work.
I'll give you a clear, honest structural assessment of your first chapters: what's working, what isn't, and why. No line edits, no rewriting just focused feedback that helps you understand exactly what your opening is doing and what it needs.
Every report covers hook and first impression, pacing and tension, character introduction, voice consistency, and overall story setup.
Higher tiers include an annotated manuscript with inline comments alongside the written report.
Not sure which package fits your project? Message me before ordering.
Need a full developmental edit? Check out my other gig for complete manuscript feedback up to 100,000 words.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What's the difference between your packages?
All three include a written structural report. Standard and Premium also include an annotated manuscript with inline comments. The difference is word count: 5,000 / 10,000 / 20,000 words.
Do you work with unpublished/first-time authors?
Yes. This service is especially useful if you're early in your writing journey and want honest feedback before investing more time in your manuscript.
What if I only need feedback on specific chapters?
This gig is designed for opening chapters. If you need feedback on a specific section further into your manuscript, message me before ordering.
Do you accept all genres?
Fantasy, science fiction, adventure, romance, horror, in English or Spanish.
How detailed is your feedback?
The report covers hook, pacing, character introduction, voice, and story setup. Standard and Premium tiers also include inline comments on the manuscript itself.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. This is structural feedback only — I tell you what needs attention and why. The writing is yours.
What format do you need my manuscript in?
PDF, MOBI/EPUB or Word document (.doc / .docx).
Can I ask follow-up questions after delivery?
You can send one follow-up message after delivery for clarification. For deeper discussion, consider my full developmental editing gig.
