I will critique query cover letter, novel book proposal, synopsis
Honest Feedback Stronger Stories Better Books
About this Gig
HELLO!
Your manuscript could be great and still get rejected, because of the query letter, not the book. I spent years reading submissions as a literary agent/editor, so I know the difference between a pass and a full-manuscript request. I'm not guessing what agents want, I've been the one deciding.
I critique query letters, book proposals (nonfiction, overview, comp titles, platform, chapter outline), synopses (short & long form), and cover/pitch letters.
I evaluate your submission the way an agent would: hook, market positioning, voice, clarity, and if it earns a yes.
Real agenting experience. Honest feedback, what's not working, and how to fix it. Every project treated like it's landing on a real agent's desk, because it is.
Not sure what you need? Message me first, I'll tell you honestly.
Language:
English
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FAQ
Do you work with fiction, nonfiction, or both?
Both, Fiction queries and synopses, plus nonfiction book proposals; overview, comp titles, platform, chapter outline.
Will you sugarcoat feedback, or tell me the truth?
I'll always be honest. If your query letter or synopsis isn't working, I'll say so, and tell you exactly how to fix it. You're making charges for a real shot with agents, not reassurance.

