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I will analyze your story for plot character and pacing
I will evaluate your manuscript for plot character pacing and structure
Hello. I’m Allison. I spent three years in an intensive writers’ cohort, analyzing 12,000 words each week and participating in three-hour manuscript reviews. This training taught me to identify plot h...
About this Gig
Every good story benefits from an honest, thoughtful second set of eyes.
I provide developmental manuscript critiques for writers who want to strengthen their stories before publication. Ill look at the elements that make a book work as a wholeincluding plot, character development, pacing, structure, narrative tension, and story flow.
My approach is constructive and collaborative. Ill identify whats working, point out areas that may be confusing or underdeveloped, and offer practical suggestions for strengthening the manuscript while respecting your unique voice and vision.
My experience comes from three years in an intensive writers cohort, where I analyzed 12,000 words each week and participated in three-hour deep-dive manuscript reviews. My developmental guidance has also contributed to seven self-published books.
Whether youre working on a first draft, revising a completed manuscript, or preparing your book for publication, Ill give you clear, thoughtful feedback to help you move your story forward.
Language:
English
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
Complexity level:
Intermediate
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What exactly do you do for my manuscript?
I evaluate your manuscript’s overall story and structure, focusing on plot, character development, pacing, narrative tension, and story flow. I’ll identify strengths, point out areas that may need development, and provide clear, constructive suggestions to help strengthen your manuscript while prese
What Do You Need From Me?
Please send your manuscript in an editable document format, along with a brief summary of your story and any specific concerns or questions you’d like me to consider. This helps me tailor my feedback to your goals.
