I will beta read your litrpg gamelit or progression fantasy novel

United States

I speak English, French

i will beta reader your manuscript

I’m Lorena, a passionate beta reader. I provide honest, thoughtful, and constructive feedback on novels, short stories, manuscripts, and other written works. I focus on plot, characters, pacing, clari...
About this Gig

Need an honest reader to help you make your book stronger before publishing? Im here to help!


As your beta reader, I will read your manuscript from a genuine readers perspective and provide clear, thoughtful, and constructive feedback. Ill help you understand what is working, what may be confusing, and where your story could become more engaging.


My beta reading feedback can cover:


  • Plot and story flow
  • Character development and consistency
  • Pacing and reader engagement
  • Dialogue and readability
  • Emotional impact
  • Confusing or unclear scenes
  • Strengths and weaknesses
  • Overall reading experience


Whether you have a novel, novella, short story, or manuscript, I will give your work the attention it deserves. I believe useful feedback should be honest but respectful, so Ill point out both the strongest parts of your story and areas that may need improvement.


You will receive practical feedback that can help you see your manuscript from a fresh perspective and make confident revisions.


Before ordering, please send me your word count and genre if you have any questions about which package is right for you.


Lets work together to help your story connect with your readers!

Genre:

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Romance

Science

Fantasy

Language:

English

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