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I will plot and character critique
About this Gig
I'll read your fiction from a reader's perspective and provide thoughtful, constructive feedback on your plot, characters, pacing, dialogue and overall development. Whether you're writing a first draft, revising an existing manuscript or preparing for publication, I'll help you spot problems and discover opportunities to make your story more engaging.
Does the story make sense? Are there plot holes or unresolved threads? Is the beginning, middle and ending satisfying?
Are the characters believable and engaging? Do their motivations make sense? Are their actions consistent? Do they grow throughout the story?
Are sections too slow or rushed? Does the story maintain momentum? Do important moments receive enough attention?
Does the dialogue sound natural? Does each character have a distinct voice? Does it move the story forward?
I'll flag inconsistencies involving characters, timelines, relationships, locations and other story details.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Will you rewrite my story?
No. I provide feedback and suggestions while preserving your writing style, voice and creative vision.
Will you tell me if something isn't working?
Absolutely. My feedback is honest, constructive and designed to help you strengthen your story.
Do you check grammar and spelling?
This service focuses on story development rather than proofreading. A separate proofreading service is available.
What if I only have a first draft?
That's absolutely fine. Early feedback can be particularly useful for identifying larger plot and character issues before you begin revising.
Will my manuscript remain confidential?
Yes. Your manuscript and personal information will be treated as private and confidential.
