I will give you showrunner notes on your script

I've spent my career in writers' rooms, most recently as a showrunner. I ran the iCarly revival at Paramount+, and I've written and produced for Disney+, Netflix, NBC, and Hulu. I've read thousands of scripts and been in the room when pitches land and when they don't.

Now I want to read yours.

You'll get the notes I'd give a writer on my own staff: honest, specific, and actually usable. I read anything--story is story, character is character, and funny is funny. I'll tell you what's working so you keep it, what isn't so you can fix it, and why. I look at structure, character, jokes, pacing, and whether the thing is sellable.

My sweet spot is comedy and family, but I read across genres.

What you won't get: AI-generated notes, a generic checklist, a pile of typo corrections, or a note that says "make it pop."

Before you order, send me your logline and what you want the script to do for you (contests, landing representation, pitching, or just getting better). I'll tell you honestly whether I'm the right fit.

Want to talk it through? Add a 60-minute Zoom call to any package. You read my notes first, then we meet so you can ask questions, push back, and brainstorm fixes.