I will developmentally edit your memoir chapters

Youve written the story. Now you need to know whether its working on the page.

I provide thoughtful developmental editing specifically for memoir and personal narrative. I look beyond grammar and sentence-level corrections to the elements that shape your readers experience: structure, narrative arc, pacing, scenes, character development, emotional depth, voice, and theme.

As both a memoir writer and developmental editor, I understand the particular challenge of shaping real experiences into a compelling narrative while staying true to what happened and to your individual voice.

Ill identify whats already working, where your reader may lose connection or clarity, and where your manuscript has opportunities for greater depth. Youll receive detailed, actionable feedback to guide your revision, including inline comments and an editorial assessment.

Whether youre testing your first chapter or developing several chapters of your manuscript, my goal is to give you a clear understanding of what your memoir needs next.