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I will proofread developmental editor dark romance novel editor fantasy memoir sci fi
Gig Summary
Transforming Manuscripts Through Insightful, Actionable Editorial Feedback
I’m a professional developmental editor specializing in fiction and nonfiction books. I help authors strengthen their manuscripts through thoughtful, big-picture feedback on plot, structure, pacing, c...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
hartwellemily
Germany
. Every suggestion was clear and practical, and I never felt like my writing style was being changed. My manuscript is much stronger because of their guidance....
harris_well
United Kingdom
She did an excellent job proofreading my fantasy romance manuscript. Her attention to detail was outstanding, and she carefully corrected errors while preserving...
mitchell_krane
United States
Fantastic experience! My eBook was formatted perfectly and displayed beautifully across different devices. The seller was knowledgeable, quick to respond, and...
About this Gig
Your Story Has Potential. Let's Make It Unpardonable.
Stuck with a manuscript that almost works but you can't figure out why? You're not alone; most writers can fix grammar, but structural issues (weak pacing, flat character arcs, plot holes, saggy middles) are what actually get manuscripts rejected.
That's where I come in.
As a developmental editor, I don't just point out problems; I solve them. I dig into your story's bones: structure, character motivation, pacing, tension, and reader engagement, then hand you a clear road map to fix it.
- Identify plot holes & pacing issues before agents/readers do
- Strengthen character arcs so readers actually care
- Sharpen your hook, stakes, and story structure
- Actionable editorial letter + in-line notes (not vague feedback)
Niche speciality:
- Romantasy
- Cozy fantasy
- Science fiction
- Paranormal Romance
- Self-Help / Personal Development Nonfiction
- Ya Fantasy
- Mystery
- Dark Romance
I know what today's readers (and algorithms) are pulling toward, and I'll help your manuscript meet that moment.
Stop guessing what's "off" with your story. Let's find it, fix it, and get it reader-ready.
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing focuses on the big picture of your book, including structure, flow, characters, and overall clarity, rather than just grammar or spelling.
Will you rewrite my book?
No. You receive detailed guidance and suggestions so you can improve your manuscript while keeping your original voice intact.
What file formats do you accept?
Microsoft Word (.doc or .docx) is preferred to allow tracked comments and edits.
What's the difference between developmental editing and copyediting?
Developmental editing fixes the big picture; plot, structure, pacing, characters. Copyediting fixes grammar, punctuation, and line-level issues. You need developmental editing first.
Will you tell me if my story is "good enough" to publish or query agents?
Yes. I'll give you honest, constructive feedback on whether it's query-ready or needs another revision pass.
What if I don't know what's "wrong" with my book, I just know something feels off?
That's exactly what I'm here for. Most writers can sense the problem but can't diagnose it, I identify the root cause and give you a fix.
Do you edit AI-assisted or AI-generated drafts?
Yes, I can strengthen AI-assisted drafts, tightening structure, voice, and authenticity so it reads human and original.
What do I actually receive?
An in-depth editorial letter + margin notes + follow-up consultation to walk through revisions.
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hartwellemily
Germany
. Every suggestion was clear and practical, and I never felt like my writing style was being changed. My manuscript is much stronger because of their guidance. I highly recommend this editor to any author looking for honest, professional feedback.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?H harris_well
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationShe did an excellent job proofreading my fantasy romance manuscript. Her attention to detail was outstanding, and she carefully corrected errors while preserving my writing style and voice. She communicated clearly, delivered on time, and even provided thoughtful suggestions that improved the flow of...
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?M mitchell_krane
United States
Ongoing collaborationFantastic experience! My eBook was formatted perfectly and displayed beautifully across different devices. The seller was knowledgeable, quick to respond, and delivered a high-quality final product. I highly recommend their service.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M mitchell_krane
United States
Ongoing collaborationI’m very pleased with the editing of my historical fiction novel. The seller paid close attention to the language, narrative flow, characterisation, dialogue, consistency, and overall readability. Alisson respected the historical setting while making the prose cleaner and more engaging. Very professional service from beginning to end.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?N nathaniel_kreng
United States
I’m very pleased with the final result and would definitely recommend John to other authors looking for reliable proofreading support.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
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H hartwellemily
Germany
. Every suggestion was clear and practical, and I never felt like my writing style was being changed. My manuscript is much stronger because of their guidance. I highly recommend this editor to any author looking for honest, professional feedback.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?H harris_well
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationShe did an excellent job proofreading my fantasy romance manuscript. Her attention to detail was outstanding, and she carefully corrected errors while preserving my writing style and voice. She communicated clearly, delivered on time, and even provided thoughtful suggestions that improved the flow of...
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?M mitchell_krane
United States
Ongoing collaborationFantastic experience! My eBook was formatted perfectly and displayed beautifully across different devices. The seller was knowledgeable, quick to respond, and delivered a high-quality final product. I highly recommend their service.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M mitchell_krane
United States
Ongoing collaborationI’m very pleased with the editing of my historical fiction novel. The seller paid close attention to the language, narrative flow, characterisation, dialogue, consistency, and overall readability. Alisson respected the historical setting while making the prose cleaner and more engaging. Very professional service from beginning to end.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?N nathaniel_kreng
United States
I’m very pleased with the final result and would definitely recommend John to other authors looking for reliable proofreading support.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?
