I will alpha read and assess your manuscript
Editor and Consultant for Indie Authors
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
You've finished a draft!
You've put your whole heart into your manuscript, and you deserve honest, supportive feedback to make it even better.
I will provide a 2-5 page assessment full of specific, actionable advice on:
- Beginning and Ending.
- Structuring, Plot, and Pace.
- Characters, Development, and Dialogue.
- Setting and Worldbuilding.
- Style, Consistency, and Industry Standards.
- Emotional Tone and Effect.
- Your Specific Questions.
As an author, I know the stress of sharing your work in its infancy. I promise to take great care with your style and wishes and look to develop your writing rather than change it.
My specialties include thrillers, mysteries, crime, and horror. I also work with contemporary, romance, fantasy, and sci-fi novels.
I look forward to hearing from you and am happy to chat about any custom needs you may have!
**Please note that this gig does not include in-line feedback. Feel free to contact me should you need any clarification about which service is right for you.
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
How is alpha reading different than beta reading?
An alpha reader is often the first person to read your manuscript. The feedback you receive will be very broad and assumes the story is going to change significantly. Beta reading is a little more zoomed in and focuses on plot holes (etc.) that won't override the whole manuscript.
How does assessment differ from editing?
While editing focuses on correcting grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure, editorial assessment provides an overall assessment of the story, including its strengths and weaknesses, without making direct changes to the text.
What is your pricing breakdown?
I charge 0.003¢ USD per word. According to the EFA, the average rate is 0.8–1.2¢ USD per word.
Do you use Ai?
No, I don't. I'm not even a fan of Grammarly, it's too comma-happy. All of my services are Ai-free.
Do you offer discounts?
Yes. My job is to create more creativity and joy in the world, not less, and I won't be a barrier to you achieving your dreams. Discounts are available for writers experiencing financial need, students and other writers under 25, and marginalized or underrepresented groups in the writing community.

