Alysha W is unavailable until Jun 17, 2026

I will critique and line edit your query letter twice

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

414 orders completed

bestselling author and experienced editor

I'm a bestselling author with one of the largest trade publishers. In addition to having an MFA in Creative Writing, I've also been a mentor for Author Mentor Match, and have fourteen years' worth of ...
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About this Gig

A stand-out query letter is essential to grab an agent or editor's attention. Let's create one together! In the 1st pass, I will give you detailed feedback on what is working and what's not. In the 2nd pass (on your revision), I will line edit and hone your query until it is sparkling!


*I do not use AI use*


Want a great synopsis, too? My Standard package includes a 2-Pass critique of both a query letter and synopsis.


Want feedback on the first 3 Chapters (up to 7,000 words)? My Premium package includes a 1-Pass critique. I'll give you big-picture feedback as well as necessary line edits.

 

All genres and age categories are welcome! Please use standard formatting, i.e. double-spaced, 12-point font (single-spaced for synopses). Up to 1 page for queries, 1-2 for synopsis.

Language:

English

Genre:

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

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204 reviews for this Gig
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    carol_b_allen

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I would not hesitate to put my work in Alysha’s hands. She is bright, capable and fully understands an author’s needs. She is competent and fluent in assessing gaps and making excellent recommendations. When you work with her, you can be sure you are receiving an exceptional level of service.

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

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    addy_dunn

    US

    United States

    5

    I feel so much more confident about my query letter! This purchase was 100% worth it and the communication, responsiveness, and encouragement was absolutely perfect.

    Up to $50

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    2 days

    Duration

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    mjqueneau

    US

    United States

    5

    She's grade A! Love her communication, depth of knowledge and how comfortable it was to work with her. Alysha has a deep understanding of what you are trying to accomplish, your timeline and what you envision for final project. Enjoyed it!

    Up to $50

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    1 day

    Duration

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    imcook22

    IL

    Israel

    5

    I’ve worked with many editors and Alysha is at the top of my list. She provided the reasoning for suggested changes, delivered early, and was prompt and clear when answering questions.

    $100-$200

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

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    racheal_fernand

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Alysha was super professional and incredibly helpful when critiquing my query letter. I appreciated her willingness to provide honest feedback and make my query letter 10x better. Thank Alysha!

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

204 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(201)
(2)
(1)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • C
    image-docs

    carol_b_allen

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I would not hesitate to put my work in Alysha’s hands. She is bright, capable and fully understands an author’s needs. She is competent and fluent in assessing gaps and making excellent recommendations. When you work with her, you can be sure you are receiving an exceptional level of service.

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    addy_dunn

    US

    United States

    5

    I feel so much more confident about my query letter! This purchase was 100% worth it and the communication, responsiveness, and encouragement was absolutely perfect.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    mjqueneau

    US

    United States

    5

    She's grade A! Love her communication, depth of knowledge and how comfortable it was to work with her. Alysha has a deep understanding of what you are trying to accomplish, your timeline and what you envision for final project. Enjoyed it!

    Up to $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • I

    imcook22

    IL

    Israel

    5

    I’ve worked with many editors and Alysha is at the top of my list. She provided the reasoning for suggested changes, delivered early, and was prompt and clear when answering questions.

    $100-$200

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
    image-docs

    racheal_fernand

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Alysha was super professional and incredibly helpful when critiquing my query letter. I appreciated her willingness to provide honest feedback and make my query letter 10x better. Thank Alysha!

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No