I will critique your first chapter and give actionable feedback

Alyssa

Canada

I speak English, Portuguese

Chapter Critiques and Beta Reading

Hi! I’m Alyssa, a romantasy author and bookish content creator who loves discovering new stories and helping authors make them shine. I offer thoughtful, honest, and actionable first chapter critique...
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About this Gig

Have a first chapter you're not quite sure about? I'd love to help!


I'll read your opening chapter and give you honest, thoughtful, and constructive feedback on what's working, what could be stronger, and how you can improve it.


I'll look at things like:

  • Your opening hook
  • Characters & character voice
  • Pacing & tension
  • POV & clarity
  • Dialogue
  • Description & worldbuilding
  • Overall reader experience
  • Actionable suggestions for revision


My goal isn't to tear your chapter apart it's to help you see what's already working and where you can make it even better. Think of it as getting feedback from a fellow book lover and writer who wants to see your story succeed!


I welcome romance, romantasy, fantasy, YA, NA, adult, and more. Whether you're preparing to publish, query agents, or simply want another set of eyes on your opening, I'm happy to help.


Send me your chapter and let's make that first page impossible to put down!

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Language:

English

Content type:

Book

Genre:

Romance

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Fantasy

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