I will double beta read and offer inline feedback
Developmental editors and professional beta readers
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What people loved about this freelancer
andrew_rylands

United Kingdom
Ana and Josie were a pleasure to work with. They 'got' my work, and provided me with a level of calm, objective and professional feedback. They even managed...
jasonrosenbaum2

United States
I really appreciate the care and work Josie and Ana did with my novel. As other people have noted, they write really through personalized letters. And they...
maureenkay415

United States
Ana and Josie were wonderful to work with. They offered unique (sometimes very funny and sweet) comments and insights and their in-line notes allowed me to...
jalfamais

United States
Ana and Josie provided exactly the kind of feedback every writer hopes for in late-stage beta readers. Their comments moved well beyond grammar and plot into...
citymarket2015

United States
A professional-level service that provides valuable feedback for your chapters; inline comments allow for the mapping of the reader's journey, while an accompanying...
About this Gig
Our 500 five-star reviews tell you what authors love about our work!
We're two avid readers who will beta read your manuscript and offer you in-line feedback about characters, plot, setting, pace, and our honest reactions while we're reading your book. You can also let us know if you'd like our commentaries to focus on something specific.
At the end of the gig you'll receive two different files, so you know our individual opinions and reactions. We both hold degrees related to the field and have professional experience with developmental editing and content and creative writing.
We're ideal readers for the following genres, both historical and contemporary:
- Sci-Fi/Apocalyptic
- Fantasy/Magical Realism/Paranormal
- Mystery/Thrillers
- YA
- Rom-coms/Romance
- Women's Fiction
- Memoirs & Biographical Fiction
- Non-fiction
We're also a good fit for any kind of story that portrays a fierce heroine, characters coming from own voices, friendship, family relations, and multicultural backdrop.
OBS.: Please, note that you can use the input box in the package options for custom word count (see FAQ).
Contact us and we'll be delighted to work with you and your story.
Language:
English
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Portuguese
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FAQ
How does your price/packages work?
Besides the 3 options you see (Basic, Standard, Premium), you can use the input box for additional words inside a package. For example: If your work has a word count of 22k, you can go to our Basic Package and write down 22000 in the input box. The system will give you the right price.
Why are your fees higher than other beta readers?
You're hiring TWO people. You'll receive two individual critique letters and two sets of in-line comments. We have the knowledge and the experience to tell you exactly what your book is lacking and how to fix it. Beta-reading is also our full-time job, which means you have our undivided attention.
What if I can't find my word count listed?
Send us a message and we can work things out. We are up to any novel-length story (epic 120k+ we are looking at you!) and in case you'd like it, we'll offer our perception as readers for parts that could become a spin-off for your book/series or a split for two books in a series.
Do you make editing in the existing file?
Yes, we'll provide in-text notes on your file. We'll also send a brief critique letter with our overall impression.
Will two people read my manuscript?
Yes, we'll read it separately and offer you two files with our feedback. At the end of the gig, you'll have the work of two independent beta readers.
What if I'm not sure you are a good fit for my genre?
Send us a message and we'll discuss it. We can say from the beginning we are not a good fit for poetry and horror. We love poetry, but we don't have the skills to beta read them; and the latter genre will make us have some bad dreams at night! :D
How do I know if your critique style is right for me?
You can see examples of our beta-reading feedback in the gallery. You can also send us your first chapters for a start and we'll keep from there later if you think it might be a good idea. :)
Will you sign a non-disclosure agreement for the confidentiality of my book?
It will be our pleasure to sign it if you may choose this option. We understand that confidentiality is a normal concern for writers, as well as the possibility of someone stealing your book. Don't worry, your story and your work are in our best interest.
How does subscription work?
You can subscribe to our gig for 6 months with a 20% discount from the second month. It's ideal for people with a work in progress, so every month you can send new chapters for us (the system also helps you to keep on track with your production). It's great for people with multiple books too.
643 reviews for this Gig
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A andrew_rylands

United Kingdom
Ana and Josie were a pleasure to work with. They 'got' my work, and provided me with a level of calm, objective and professional feedback. They even managed to deliver it a day or two ahead of the deadline. The feedback I received was actionable, rather than vague. In summary, I am very pleased with it, and I'm happy to work with them again in the future.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jasonrosenbaum2
Repeat Client

United States
I really appreciate the care and work Josie and Ana did with my novel. As other people have noted, they write really through personalized letters. And they provided me with some specific ways to make the novel more marketable to potential agents. They also turned in the novel on time and for a very fair...
$600-$800
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M maureenkay415

United States
Ana and Josie were wonderful to work with. They offered unique (sometimes very funny and sweet) comments and insights and their in-line notes allowed me to see what a reader would be thinking in real time. I found this invaluable. They overlapped with a suggestion for a structural change and from the...
$800-$1,000
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jalfamais

United States
Ana and Josie provided exactly the kind of feedback every writer hopes for in late-stage beta readers. Their comments moved well beyond grammar and plot into emotional authenticity, character relationships, continuity, and reader experience. They caught subtle places where clarity or pacing could be...
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C citymarket2015

United States
A professional-level service that provides valuable feedback for your chapters; inline comments allow for the mapping of the reader's journey, while an accompanying summary answers general questions and evaluates the overall quality of the writing. I would definitely recommend this gig to those who want...
$50-$100
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
643 reviews for this Gig
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| (11) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
A andrew_rylands

United Kingdom
Ana and Josie were a pleasure to work with. They 'got' my work, and provided me with a level of calm, objective and professional feedback. They even managed to deliver it a day or two ahead of the deadline. The feedback I received was actionable, rather than vague. In summary, I am very pleased with it, and I'm happy to work with them again in the future.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jasonrosenbaum2
Repeat Client

United States
I really appreciate the care and work Josie and Ana did with my novel. As other people have noted, they write really through personalized letters. And they provided me with some specific ways to make the novel more marketable to potential agents. They also turned in the novel on time and for a very fair...
$600-$800
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M maureenkay415

United States
Ana and Josie were wonderful to work with. They offered unique (sometimes very funny and sweet) comments and insights and their in-line notes allowed me to see what a reader would be thinking in real time. I found this invaluable. They overlapped with a suggestion for a structural change and from the...
$800-$1,000
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jalfamais

United States
Ana and Josie provided exactly the kind of feedback every writer hopes for in late-stage beta readers. Their comments moved well beyond grammar and plot into emotional authenticity, character relationships, continuity, and reader experience. They caught subtle places where clarity or pacing could be...
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C citymarket2015

United States
A professional-level service that provides valuable feedback for your chapters; inline comments allow for the mapping of the reader's journey, while an accompanying summary answers general questions and evaluates the overall quality of the writing. I would definitely recommend this gig to those who want...
$50-$100
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

