I will double beta read your ya or mg novel and provide developmental feedback

Two sets of eyes. Two reactions to your current writing project. One fee. 

Ready to take the plunge and get some constructive feedback on your manuscript? Want an honest opinion on what is working and what isn't? Curious if your humor reads funny or if your murder mystery is suspenseful enough?

We are avid readers of most things fiction with years of teaching, editing, beta experience. We have joined forces to provide a mother-daughter beta team to offer you a unique service.

We include inline commentary throughout the manuscript regarding: plot, characters, pacing, setting, etc. We will also let you know when passages read rough or fluidly, things we loved and those parts that missed the mark.

A follow up overall report will give a larger impression of your work hitting the big picture items: strength of intro, major plot holes, character relevance, any questions we have, and what works best in your writing.

We are accepting fiction reads. Our favorite genres are Romance (all subs), Suspense, YA, NA, Mystery, Cozies, and Fantasy.

Feel free to contact us if your piece is shorter or longer; we have other packages.