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I will complete a developmental edit of your novel by two editors
Developmental Editors
Hello! We are Angela and Mikaela - a mom and daughter working together.
We're both avid readers and have been professionally editing and beta reading for five years.
We are both certified, practici...
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What people loved about this freelancer
webitheauthor
United Kingdom
I loved how quickly Angela Mikaela engaged and the quick turnaround to provide me with gaps in my children's story which I missed early, setting me up for success....
crookedunicorn
United States
Delightful and polite while telling the truth about what my project needed to proceed to the next level. Genuinely appreciate the time and effort this team put in to make my work something that resonates.
kay_jay_bee90
Australia
The notes and comments provided were really useful for me to get an understanding of how a reader would see the book and also for what is working and what isn't...
About this Gig
Ready to take the plunge and get some constructive feedback on your manuscript? How about feedback from an editing team?
We are a mother daughter editing duo who work together as educators, writers, and editors. We have a solid track record of providing excellent editorial services to our author customers both on Fiverr and off.
As seasoned English teachers, we are practiced at giving solid, constructive feedback that points out the elements of your writing that shine and the other parts that need work.
We will each read and respond to your manuscript offering constructive developmental feedback through inline commentary, light editing for flow, and some modeled rewrites.
We will follow up with a full in depth editorial report discussing:
- The first 50 pages
- Characterization
- Flow
- Consistency
- Voice
- World Building
- Pacing
- Dialogue
- Style
- Genre trends
We will accept manuscripts in the following genres:
- Romance (all heat levels and subgenres)
- YA
- Mystery
- Suspense
- Fantasy
- Literary Fiction
We look forward to working with you.
Language:
English
Genre:
Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
POV:
Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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webitheauthor
United Kingdom
I loved how quickly Angela Mikaela engaged and the quick turnaround to provide me with gaps in my children's story which I missed early, setting me up for success. There delivery was easy to understand and added value. I would be using them again and loved that I have 2 pair of eyes editing my work together. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?C 
crookedunicorn
United States
Delightful and polite while telling the truth about what my project needed to proceed to the next level. Genuinely appreciate the time and effort this team put in to make my work something that resonates.
$200-$400
Price
7 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kay_jay_bee90
Australia
The notes and comments provided were really useful for me to get an understanding of how a reader would see the book and also for what is working and what isn't working within the story line and character arcs. I appreciate the thoughtful and relevant feedback as it is all useable and helpful.
$200-$400
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J 
jenniferconr549
Repeat Client
United States
I enjoy having more than one person look at my book and discuss together things that worked and didn't work as well as get different opinions. They did a good job finding the flaws in my work, which is exactly what I pay them for. Thank you!
$400-$600
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jacjones_11
United States
I really enjoyed working with Angela and Mikaela! With this being my first novel, their feedback and suggestions were very eyeopening and important to me. They helped keep my excitement for this journey alive! Also, communicating with them was easy, and I looked forward to what they were going to recommend...
$400-$600
Price
7 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
96 reviews for this Gig
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| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
W webitheauthor
United Kingdom
I loved how quickly Angela Mikaela engaged and the quick turnaround to provide me with gaps in my children's story which I missed early, setting me up for success. There delivery was easy to understand and added value. I would be using them again and loved that I have 2 pair of eyes editing my work together. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?C crookedunicorn
United States
Delightful and polite while telling the truth about what my project needed to proceed to the next level. Genuinely appreciate the time and effort this team put in to make my work something that resonates.
$200-$400
Price
7 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kay_jay_bee90
Australia
The notes and comments provided were really useful for me to get an understanding of how a reader would see the book and also for what is working and what isn't working within the story line and character arcs. I appreciate the thoughtful and relevant feedback as it is all useable and helpful.
$200-$400
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jenniferconr549
Repeat Client
United States
I enjoy having more than one person look at my book and discuss together things that worked and didn't work as well as get different opinions. They did a good job finding the flaws in my work, which is exactly what I pay them for. Thank you!
$400-$600
Price
8 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jacjones_11
United States
I really enjoyed working with Angela and Mikaela! With this being my first novel, their feedback and suggestions were very eyeopening and important to me. They helped keep my excitement for this journey alive! Also, communicating with them was easy, and I looked forward to what they were going to recommend...
$400-$600
Price
7 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
