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I will elevate your manuscript with expert feedback
Brazil
I speak English, Portuguese
Elevate Your Manuscript with Expert Feedback
Hello! I’m an engineer, published technical author, and a lifelong bibliophile with a deep-seated passion for storytelling. Whether you are crafting an intricate fantasy world or a high-stakes thrille...
About this Gig
My Focus Areas
When I read your manuscript, I focus on the pillars that make a story truly unforgettable:
- Plot Consistency & Logic: Identifying plot holes and ensuring your narrative arc is airtight.
- Pacing: Analyzing flow to ensure your story hooks the reader and maintains momentum.
- Character Development: Assessing motivations and arcs to ensure your cast resonates with the audience.
- Worldbuilding & Immersion: Evaluating the richness of your setting and the believability of your "rules."
- Overall Reader Experience: Providing a "real-time" reaction, highlighting what works and where engagement dips.
I am particularly well-suited for Fantasy, Mystery, Horror, and Thrillers. Additionally, I am available to review Technical Books, leveraging my engineering background to ensure clarity and professional accuracy.
Genre:
Adventure
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Education
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Horror/ thriller
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Mystery
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What kind of feedback will I receive in my report?
My feedback is designed to be "real-world" reader analysis. I tell you exactly where I was hooked, where I was confused, and where I felt the story could be strengthened.
What genres are you most comfortable with?
My focus is Fantasy, Mystery, Horror, and Thriller. However, as a published technical author and engineer, I am also qualified to review technical manuals, educational guides, and non-fiction projects where precision and clarity are paramount.
Do you offer "real-time" discussion or calls?
Absolutely. While the written report is the core of my service, I am happy to hop on a call or engage in a real-time chat via Fiverr to discuss my feedback, clarify my notes, and brainstorm solutions with you.
Are you available for technical or non-fiction editing?
Yes. If you need someone to ensure your technical documentation is logical, easy to follow, and error-free, I am happy to assist.
Do you offer proofreading or line editing?
No, my services are strictly focused on developmental reading and story analysis. My goal is to help you strengthen your plot, pacing, and character development. While I may highlight specific phrases that seem complicated or unclear, I am not performing a full copy-edit or grammatical review.
