I will give you professional feedback on your screenplay
Independent film production
About this Gig
Do you want honest, professional, and constructive feedback on your screenplay? I offer dramaturgical feedback to help you identify the strengths, weaknesses, and full potential of your script. My focus is not on empty praise, but on clear, useful notes that can truly improve your work. I look at structure, characters, plot, emotional impact, clarity, and overall storytelling.
- General Feedback: At least 1 page of professional written feedback on structure, characters, and plot.
- Extended Feedback: More detailed dramaturgical feedback with concrete suggestions for improving characters, plot, and content.
- Full Analysis: A deep analysis of your screenplay covering structure, characters, plot, and emotional effect, plus an assessment of producibility, financing potential, and marketability, including strategic advice.
Important note: I always aim to give feedback in a respectful and constructive way. At the same time, I will address weaknesses and areas for improvement openly, because that is the only way your screenplay can grow.
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
Are there any genre restrictions?
No. I read all genres. The only requirement is that your script is fictional. I do not review YouTube, content, or marketing scripts in this gig, as I offer a separate service for those.
What format should I send my screenplay in?
Please send your script as a PDF. Ideally, it should be written in a standard industry screenplay format.
Do you review short films, feature films, and series?
Yes. I review short films, feature films, and series projects. The most important thing is that it is a fictional screen project. Please let me know what format it is intended for.
Will your feedback be honest, even if it is critical?
Yes. My feedback is always constructive and respectful, but also honest. I do not just praise a script — I focus on weaknesses, unclear areas, and ways to improve it.
What if I do not agree with the feedback?
Feedback is always based on professional judgment and experience. You do not have to agree with every point, but the notes are meant to help you reflect on and improve your script.
Do you also evaluate producibility and market potential?
Yes, but only in the Full Analysis package. That package also includes feedback on producibility, financing potential, and marketability.
Can you rewrite my screenplay for me?
No. This gig is focused on dramaturgical feedback and analysis, not ghostwriting or full script rewriting.

