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I will edit medical school, residency or fellowship personal statement, mock interview
From First Draft to Final Polish
Hello, I'm Gordon, an MBA graduate from Harvard University with a passion for helping writers, students, and professionals present their work at its highest standard. I provide beta reading, personal ...
About this Gig
A strong application statement should do more than explain what you have done. It should make the reader understand why your experiences matter, what shaped your ambitions, and why you are ready for the path you are pursuing.
That is where thoughtful editing makes a difference.
I help applicants turn strong experiences and ideas into clear, compelling personal statements, residency essays, fellowship statements, and SOPs. I go beyond grammar correction by strengthening your story, removing repetition, improving flow, and ensuring your motivation, strengths, and goals come through with clarity and impact.
What I'll Improve:
- Story & structure: Build purposeful narrative instead of a list of achievements.
- Clarity & voice: Refine awkward while keeping your authentic voice.
- Flow & impact: Strengthen transitions and make your experiences more meaningful.
- Conciseness: Remove repetition, and unnecessary details.
- Admissions focus: Ensure your strongest qualities, motivation, and goals stand out.
Every project begins with understanding your draft, target program, experiences, and goals, then refine the writing with purpose while strengthening the overall story.
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Language:
English
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German
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Spanish
Content type:
Personal statement
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CV
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Essay
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
Can I see a sample of your work?
Unfortunately, I'm not at liberty to share samples of the content I've edited for other authors, as I do not own the copyright (not to mention I respect confidentiality). That being said, I have many 5-star reviews from enthusiastic customers that attest to the value I provide.
What does a 1:1 live review session look like?
After we schedule a meeting on Fiverr, we'll meet over Zoom for a 1:1 live review of your application. I'll give you real-time insight, suggest edits, offer different ways of framing your narrative, showcase examples from willing applicants (including myself!), with time for questions throughout!
Will you rewrite my entire essay?
No. I respect your voice and story. My job is to strategically edit, reshape, and strengthen what’s there, not replace your experience with generic content.
Can you help with other application sections?
Absolutely. I'm happy to help with secondary applications, traditional and MMI mock interviews, and school selection/navigating MSAR. Just let me know what you need, and I'd be happy to help. For any questions/inquiries feel free to send me a chat over Fiverr--I'd be happy to get in touch.
Do I (the customer) have full rights to this content?
Yes. After I complete the edits, you can alter it, attribute it to yourself (or your co-authors), and publish it.
Do you offer discounts?
No. Reducing the price would be sub-optimal for us both. It would cause me to expedite my work (to make up for my time/skill level) and I would end up delivering you a product that’s not to my standard. I’m a perfectionist, so my prices reflect the time it takes to give you the best product.
Can you rewrite my content so that it passes AI-detectors?
With my edits, your content will certainly sound more human, but I can't guarantee that it won't be marked as AI-generated in detection tools. That's because they are still relatively new and aren't 100% foolproof.
Can you edit my CV or resume too?
Yes. If you’d like CV editing bundled with your personal statement, let me know. I offer custom packages for applicants with multiple materials.
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Ongoing collaborationI had an amazing experience working with Gordon on my personal comments essay. He was highly responsive, provided thoughtful and insightful feedback, and delivered the completed draft earlier than expected. His suggestions greatly improved the overall quality of my essay. I would definitely recommend his services
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Ongoing collaborationI had an amazing experience working with Gordon on my personal comments essay. He was highly responsive, provided thoughtful and insightful feedback, and delivered the completed draft earlier than expected. His suggestions greatly improved the overall quality of my essay. I would definitely recommend his services
$50
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2 days
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