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I will fix weak section, plot holes, developmental editor for young adult fiction novel
Full Service Book, Course and Digital Product Creation Expert
Developmental editing, online course creation, book design & website development—done right from the start. I’m AOIFE, and for years I’ve helped authors and creators turn raw ideas into polished books...
About this Gig
I Will Fix weak sections, plot holes and story structure with a developmental editor for your Young Adult fiction novel.
If your manuscript has a strong idea but uneven pacing, unclear motivations, missing connections or chapters that lose momentum, I'll help you see what is workingand what needs rebuilding.
I'm Aoife, a detail-focused editor who approaches your manuscript from both an editorial and reader perspective. I start with your goals, target age, genre and current draft, then trace the story's structure, character arcs, pacing, continuity, tension and emotional payoff.
Instead of rewriting your voice, I explain the problem, why it matters and how you can strengthen it.
My wider creative support covers book editing, publishing and design, with complementary expertise across online courses, video courses, presentations, websites and digital products. That means you can keep your creative projects aligned from manuscript to market. For YA fiction, I can assess weak sections, plot holes, chapter flow, character development, worldbuilding and reader engagement.
Send your manuscript now, and let's turn a promising draft into story readers want to finish.
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What exactly does your developmental editing include?
I look at the manuscript at the story level: plot, structure, character development, pacing, chapter flow, continuity, tension and reader engagement. You'll receive specific observations and practical recommendations rather than vague praise.
Can you find plot holes that I haven't noticed?
Yes. I'll follow the story's internal logic, character motivations, timeline and cause-and-effect relationships to identify places where the narrative may confuse readers or stop making sense.
Do you specialize in Young Adult fiction?
This gig is specifically positioned for YA authors. I'm particularly interested in manuscripts where character growth, emotional stakes, pacing and reader engagement are central to the story.
Will you rewrite my novel?
Not as part of the standard developmental edit. My role is to identify what needs attention, explain why it matters and give you a clear path for revision while protecting your individual authorial voice.
Can you edit my entire YA novel?
Yes. For a complete manuscript, please message me with the word count, genre and current draft stage before ordering. I'll recommend the appropriate scope and create a custom offer when necessary.
Can you work with YA fantasy, romance or thriller?
Yes. YA is the primary audience for this gig, and the same developmental principles can be applied across fantasy, romance, thriller, contemporary and other YA subgenres.
Can you help with the book after the developmental edit?
Yes. My broader creative services cover book editing, publishing and book design, as well as digital content such as courses, presentations, websites and digital products. That means your manuscript can continue into the next stage with a consistent creative partner.
