I will critique your literary agent query letter with clear feedback

A query letter can contain the right information and still lose impact if its message is unclear or difficult to follow. I will critique your literary agent query letter and provide practical feedback on the writing, structure, pitch, and positioning.

My review will examine the hook, premise, central conflict, stakes, genre, character introduction, comparables, author information, and closing. I will point out sections that create confusion, feel too broad, repeat information, or fail to communicate the project efficiently.

Rather than rewriting your query without explanation, this service is designed to show you what is working and where improvements may be needed. You can submit your query letter with its genre, word count, book description, and submission requirements.

Your feedback will be organized so you can make informed revisions before contacting agents. I can also identify opportunities to sharpen the pitch while keeping your voice and intended message intact.

Send your current query letter and MESSAGE ME before ordering. I will assess it as an agent facing submission document and return actionable revision feedback.