I will provide developmental editing, a structural critique, and an editorial letter
Literary Agent Research, Query and Submission Support
About this Gig
Congratulations on finishing your book draft! The next step is making sure your story is strong enough to impress a traditional literary agent.
Every year, thousands of brilliant books get rejected because of plot holes, slow pacing, or weak structure. As a professional editor with a degree in book publishing, I am here to help you fix those flaws. I will give your manuscript the deep, structural care it needs so you can submit your work with absolute confidence.
What I offer in this gig:
- Developmental Editing: Direct, hands-on inline notes inside your file to fix character arcs, narrative pacing, and chapter layout.
- Manuscript Critique: A simple, high-level review report analyzing what parts of your story work and what areas need your attention.
- Professional Editorial Letter: A detailed, elite industry letter outlining a clear step-by-step roadmap to make your manuscript stand out.
I provide supportive, human, and practical feedback tailored to your unique voice. Let's polish your manuscript before you send your query letter to industry gatekeepers.
Message me today to discuss your book details!
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FAQ
What is the main difference between your manuscript critique and developmental editing?
My manuscript critique is a high-level summary report pointing out what works or needs fixing, while developmental editing involves hands-on, inline structural notes left directly inside your file.
Do you edit full books or just the word count limits listed in your packages?
My premium packages cover up to 50,000 words, but you can message me anytime for a custom offer if you have a longer manuscript or a full-length novel.
Can I send you a nonfiction manuscript or a book proposal draft?
Yes, I provide structural feedback for both fiction novels and nonfiction projects to ensure your layout matches book publishing industry standards.
What is a professional editorial letter and how does it help me?
An editorial letter is an elite, industry-standard feedback guide that gives you an organized, step-by-step roadmap to fix your book's major plot and structural flaws.
Will your editing feedback help me prepare my manuscript for a traditional literary agent?
Yes, this service is designed to polish your story structure and pacing so your manuscript meets the high standards required by traditional book publishing gatekeepers.

