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I will developmental edit and proofread, fiction, non fiction, fantasy novel book edit
4.9
4.9
Canada
I speak English, Arabic, Dutch, German, French, Spanish, Norwegian
77 orders completed
Developmental book editor
My name is Ariadne Vesper, and I specialise in developmental editing, proofreading, and comprehensive book editing across a wide range of genres, including romance, memoirs, novels, Sci-fi, dark roman...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
sophiesal1994
United Kingdom
I'm really impressed with the feedback. Ariandneve is the first person to read my book, and the notes provided were exceptional. Each chapter was clearly broken...
jansoames
United Kingdom
This is the first time I have worked with Ariadneve, she has edited my manuscript extremely well, and I feel confident that it is now at its best. The work...
myishaqh
United States
I had difficulty with a previous editor, I explained my expectations, as well as my concerns. My issues were understood and BOTH of my items were delivered...
brozik
Netherlands
Second time working with Ariadneve and it is as good as the first time. Professional, fast delivery, reliable and nice to communicate with. Best professional...
mz_stuart
United States
She did a great job with just about everything! the attention to detail, the cooperation, the way she made my words flow on the paper like a real fantasy book. I highly recommend her services!
About this Gig
I will developmental edit and proofread your fiction or non-fiction book with a focus on improving flow, structure, and readability while keeping your voice intact. I work with fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children's books.
What I offer:
- Clean, organized manuscript delivery
- Clear in-line suggestions to improve clarity and flow
- Proofreading for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and consistency
- Developmental editing for structure, pacing, plot, and character depth
- Feedback that helps you strengthen weak sections without losing your style
What you will get:
- Improved readability and stronger storytelling
- Careful attention to detail from start to finish
- Clear and honest feedback you can actually use
- A polished manuscript ready for publishing or submission
I treat every manuscript with focus and respect. If something is not working, I will point it out and guide you on how to fix it.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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French
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German
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Spanish
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
1. What types of books do you edit?
I edit fiction and non fiction including fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children’s books.
2. Will you change my writing style?
No. I refine your work without removing your voice. The goal is clarity and strength, not replacement.
3. Do you provide developmental feedback and proofreading together?
Yes. I look at structure and content first, then correct grammar and technical issues.
4. What format should I send my manuscript in?
Microsoft Word is preferred so I can track changes and leave comments clearly.
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S sophiesal1994
United Kingdom
I'm really impressed with the feedback. Ariandneve is the first person to read my book, and the notes provided were exceptional. Each chapter was clearly broken down with what worked well and what needed improvement, giving me a solid foundation with revisions. They also picked up on spelling mistakes...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jansoames
United Kingdom
This is the first time I have worked with Ariadneve, she has edited my manuscript extremely well, and I feel confident that it is now at its best. The work was delivered quickly. I had a problem opening the track changes file, which has left me with quite a lot of work still to do, however, I am more...
$200-$400
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?M myishaqh
United States
I had difficulty with a previous editor, I explained my expectations, as well as my concerns. My issues were understood and BOTH of my items were delivered before delivery time. There was clear communication. I definitely will work with her again.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B 
brozik
Repeat Client
Netherlands
Second time working with Ariadneve and it is as good as the first time. Professional, fast delivery, reliable and nice to communicate with. Best professional I encountered among my 13 orders on Fiverr, ordered another project. If you are reading it - just message her instead, it is worth it.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?M mz_stuart
Repeat Client
United States
She did a great job with just about everything! the attention to detail, the cooperation, the way she made my words flow on the paper like a real fantasy book. I highly recommend her services!
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
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S sophiesal1994
United Kingdom
I'm really impressed with the feedback. Ariandneve is the first person to read my book, and the notes provided were exceptional. Each chapter was clearly broken down with what worked well and what needed improvement, giving me a solid foundation with revisions. They also picked up on spelling mistakes...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jansoames
United Kingdom
This is the first time I have worked with Ariadneve, she has edited my manuscript extremely well, and I feel confident that it is now at its best. The work was delivered quickly. I had a problem opening the track changes file, which has left me with quite a lot of work still to do, however, I am more...
$200-$400
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?M myishaqh
United States
I had difficulty with a previous editor, I explained my expectations, as well as my concerns. My issues were understood and BOTH of my items were delivered before delivery time. There was clear communication. I definitely will work with her again.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B brozik
Repeat Client
Netherlands
Second time working with Ariadneve and it is as good as the first time. Professional, fast delivery, reliable and nice to communicate with. Best professional I encountered among my 13 orders on Fiverr, ordered another project. If you are reading it - just message her instead, it is worth it.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?M mz_stuart
Repeat Client
United States
She did a great job with just about everything! the attention to detail, the cooperation, the way she made my words flow on the paper like a real fantasy book. I highly recommend her services!
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
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