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I will developmental edit and proofread, fiction, non fiction, fantasy novel book edit
4.9
4.9
United States
I speak English, Arabic, Dutch, German, French, Spanish, Norwegian
123 orders completed
Gig Summary
Developmental book editor
My name is Ariadne Vesper, and I specialise in developmental editing, proofreading, and comprehensive book editing across a wide range of genres, including romance, memoirs, novels, Sci-fi, dark roman...
Buyers keep returning
Ariadneve has an exceptional number of repeat buyers
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
maraz12345
Malta
The level of work is very good, would have expected more feedback in line with developmental editing, the editing was more of line editing. Also my manuscript...
x_ellarose
United States
Timely and will be using her freelancing work for future orders with my publishing company. Also, very reasonably priced. Other people were quoting me outrageous...
mz_stuart
United States
She did a great job with just about everything! the attention to detail, the cooperation, the way she made my words flow on the paper like a real fantasy book. I highly recommend her services!
josieapcat
United States
This order was marked as "late" but she wasn't late. It was my fault. She did an excellent job of editing and would recommend her to anyone.
bmat2000
United States
Very detailed and helpful chapter-by-chapter feedback that will help me strengthen my novel. The line edits are very helpful too, and the order was delivered before the due date. Thanks so much!
About this Gig
I will developmental edit and proofread your fiction or non-fiction book with a focus on improving flow, structure, and readability while keeping your voice intact. I work with fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children's books.
What I offer:
- Clean, organized manuscript delivery
- Clear in-line suggestions to improve clarity and flow
- Proofreading for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and consistency
- Developmental editing for structure, pacing, plot, and character depth
- Feedback that helps you strengthen weak sections without losing your style
What you will get:
- Improved readability and stronger storytelling
- Careful attention to detail from start to finish
- Clear and honest feedback you can actually use
- A polished manuscript ready for publishing or submission
I treat every manuscript with focus and respect. If something is not working, I will point it out and guide you on how to fix it.
Language:
Dutch
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English
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French
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German
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Spanish
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
1. What types of books do you edit?
I edit fiction and non fiction including fantasy, thriller, memoir, crime story, and children’s books.
2. Will you change my writing style?
No. I refine your work without removing your voice. The goal is clarity and strength, not replacement.
3. Do you provide developmental feedback and proofreading together?
Yes. I look at structure and content first, then correct grammar and technical issues.
4. What format should I send my manuscript in?
Microsoft Word is preferred so I can track changes and leave comments clearly.
Reviews
20 reviews for this Gig
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M maraz12345
Malta
The level of work is very good, would have expected more feedback in line with developmental editing, the editing was more of line editing. Also my manuscript formatting was changed. Despite the latter, the changes made are good and the manuscript is more flowing.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?X x_ellarose
United States
Timely and will be using her freelancing work for future orders with my publishing company. Also, very reasonably priced. Other people were quoting me outrageous prices. I would one hundred percent recommend services with this freelancer. You have a loyal client in me!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M mz_stuart
Repeat Client
United States
She did a great job with just about everything! the attention to detail, the cooperation, the way she made my words flow on the paper like a real fantasy book. I highly recommend her services!
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
josieapcat
Repeat Client
United States
This order was marked as "late" but she wasn't late. It was my fault. She did an excellent job of editing and would recommend her to anyone.
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?B bmat2000
United States
Very detailed and helpful chapter-by-chapter feedback that will help me strengthen my novel. The line edits are very helpful too, and the order was delivered before the due date. Thanks so much!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
20 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
M maraz12345
Malta
The level of work is very good, would have expected more feedback in line with developmental editing, the editing was more of line editing. Also my manuscript formatting was changed. Despite the latter, the changes made are good and the manuscript is more flowing.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?X x_ellarose
United States
Timely and will be using her freelancing work for future orders with my publishing company. Also, very reasonably priced. Other people were quoting me outrageous prices. I would one hundred percent recommend services with this freelancer. You have a loyal client in me!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M mz_stuart
Repeat Client
United States
She did a great job with just about everything! the attention to detail, the cooperation, the way she made my words flow on the paper like a real fantasy book. I highly recommend her services!
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?J josieapcat
Repeat Client
United States
This order was marked as "late" but she wasn't late. It was my fault. She did an excellent job of editing and would recommend her to anyone.
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?B bmat2000
United States
Very detailed and helpful chapter-by-chapter feedback that will help me strengthen my novel. The line edits are very helpful too, and the order was delivered before the due date. Thanks so much!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
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