I will thriller beta reader review tension suspense plot holes red herrings weak twist

United States

I speak English

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Professional Book Editor Beta Reader Content Writer Proofreader

I am a U.S.-born and raised content writer, editor, proofreader, and scriptwriter with a background in English Literature from the University of California, Berkeley. I specialize in manuscript editin...
About this Gig

Have you ever wondered why readers stop reading after a few chapters, leave lukewarm reviews, or fail to connect with your characters?

As your beta reader, I provide more than a general review. I document my genuine reader experience as I move through your manuscript, helping you identify the exact moments that capture attention, create emotional impact, cause confusion, or slow the story down.

You'll receive honest, constructive feedback from the perspective of a real reader, including comments on pacing, character development, dialogue, plot consistency, emotional engagement, and overall readability. I also provide detailed inline comments so you can see my reactions and observations directly within your manuscript.

Whether you're preparing for publication, querying literary agents, or revising your next draft, my feedback will help you understand how readers truly experience your story.

I work with fantasy, sci-fi, romance, horror, mystery, thriller, young adult, and general fiction.

Genre:

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Science

Science fiction

Language:

English

French

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