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I will edit your lgbtq mystery thriller manuscript
About this Gig
Writing a story is exhausting. Editing it is harder. If your draft feels overwhelming, Ill help you cross the finish line. With 8+ years of experience, I focus on the two things that make a story unputdownable: Character and Tension.
What I Do for Your Manuscript:
Raise the Tension: I identify where your story "sags" and tighten the pacing to keep readers hooked.
Deepen Characters: I refine character voices, motivations, and arcs to make your cast feel like real people.
Improving your Impact: I polish your emotional "beats" to ensure your story resonates with readers long after the final page.
Why Me?
Ive spent nearly a decade immersed in storytelling. I provide a critical yet supportive eye to help you realize your creative vision while treating your manuscript with the respect it deserves.
SPECIAL LAUNCH OFFER
The first 10 customers receive a free custom character or scene drawing. As an artist and editor, I love helping you visualize your world while we polish the prose.
Ready to elevate your story? Message me today to claim your bonus sketch!
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
Third person limited
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Third person omniscient
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you use AI for editing?
No. I won't be feeding your work into any LLM unless you want me to.
What genres do you edit?
I primarily edit fiction, especially: - LGBTQIA+ fiction - mystery (cozy mystery, murder mystery and more) - thriller - character-driven stories If you’re unsure whether your genre is a fit, feel free to message me before ordering.
What type of editing do you offer?
Depending on the package, I offer: - big-picture feedback (plot, pacing, character arcs) - line-level edits for clarity and flow - in-document comments and suggestions
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
For this gig, unfortunately I won't be offering that. Here, I'll be focusing on guidance, clarity, and structure, not rewriting the work for you. All edits are suggestions you remain in control of.
How many revisions are included?
Basic: 1 revision Standard: 2 revisions Premium: 2 revisions Additional revisions can be added if needed.
Do you edit unfinished drafts?
Yes — as long as the draft is reasonably complete and readable. If the manuscript is very early or fragmented, a critique-style edit is usually more effective.
