I will beta read and give feedback on your writing

Looking for some feedback on your chapter, story, novel, or other document? Who better to ask than a bibliophile and fellow author? You want someone with experience on both ends of the spectrum, and I'm happy to provide that for you.

While reading your work, I'll make a report that will include:

• My overall impression of the story/chapter/article from beginning to enda discussion of how the work affected me as a reader, for better or worse.
• Whether or not there were any plot holes
• How I feel about the world/setting being presented and whether it is immersive
• Whether descriptions are too vague or too in-depth (though that's not necessarily a bad thing)
• My feelings about your characters, their arcs, and what made me feel that way about them
• If I feel characters sometimes behave out of character
• Whenever the dialogue feels stilted or unnatural
• Things that I feel may confuse readers
• Any pacing issues
• My general impression about the strengths and weaknesses of your writing
• Possible improvements you might want to consider

Any genre is welcome. Fiction is preferred. Fantasy is my wheelhouse. Real-time feedback (writing comments in the margins as I read your story) comes standard!