I will evaluate personal statements and college application essays


About this gig
PLEASE NOTE: This service is strictly for feedback and recommendations, NOT editing.
First impressions often mean everything.
Think about meeting someone for the first time. It could be your loved one's parents, a new boss, an admissions officer, or a scholarship judge. You don't just want to make a good impression; you want them to remember you.
Yet most of us get so caught up in trying to impress that we forget how important it is to say something powerful and distinctive about ourselves.
The bad news? It only takes a few seconds for someone to form a judgment.
The good news? It only takes a few seconds to leave a lasting, meaningful impression.
A personal statement or admission essay functions in the same way.
Do you want the admissions officer to determine who you are for you? Or do you want to set the tone yourself and show who you are and what makes you memorable?
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Get to know Aurora E.
Narrative Strategist and Editing Specialist
- FromRomania
- Member sinceJun 2017
- Last delivery3 weeks
Languages
English, Romanian, Norwegian Bokmål, Spanish
FAQ
Will you edit my statement?
No. This gig provides feedback only. You’ll receive detailed notes and recommendations on how to improve your essay, but I will not make direct changes to your text. If you’d like editing or proofreading, please see my other gig.
What kind of documents can I submit?
You can submit personal statements, admission essays, scholarship essays, statements of purpose, or other application-related writing. Please include the essay prompt and any word/length requirements.
How will I receive my feedback?
You will receive a Word document with my comments and recommendations. This will include in-text notes as well as an overall evaluation of strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Can you revise essays for any level of study?
Yes. I provide feedback for undergraduate, master’s, and doctoral applications, as well as scholarships and fellowship essays.
Will you write parts of my essay for me?
No. My role is to guide you with professional insight so that you can strengthen your own writing and keep your authentic voice. For editing needs, please see my separate gig.
