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I will pro romance beta reader and proofread dark critique romance ya fantasy novel
GHOSTWRITER
Hi, I’m Ava Collins, a professional ghostwriter, editor, and translator dedicated to clear, purposeful writing. I work on books, ebooks, manuscripts, articles, and more, helping turn ideas into polish...
About this Gig
Is your manuscript ready for a fresh, professional perspective?
As an experienced alpha and beta reader, I provide honest, detailed, and actionable feedback to help you strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice and vision.
I read Romance, Fantasy, Mystery, and Thriller manuscripts, including Dark Romance, Romanticist, Fantasy Romance, Paranormal Romance, and Romantic Suspense.
My feedback focuses on:
- Plot, pacing, and story flow
- Character development and consistency
- Dialogue and reader engagement
- World building and story clarity
- Plot holes, weak areas, and inconsistencies
- Overall reader experience
You will not just receive opinions you will receive practical insights you can use to improve your manuscript, whether you're refining a draft or preparing for publication.
Give your story the fresh perspective it deserves. Order now or message me to discuss your project.
Language:
English
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French
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What do you need from me to get started?
I will need your manuscript and any specific areas you would like me to pay attention to. If there’s anything you will unsure about in your story, feel free to point it out before I begin.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You will receive honest, constructive feedback on things like plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, clarity, reader engagement, and overall reading experience. I will point out what works as well as what could be stronger.
Will you rewrite or change my story?
No. My role is to give you a reader’s perspective, not take over your writing. I will explain what affected my reading experience and leave the creative decisions to you.
Do you provide inline comments?
Yes! I can add inline comments with reactions, notes, and suggestions for improvement just let me know before I start.
Can I ask you specific questions about my manuscript?
Absolutely. If there are particular scenes, characters, plot points, or concerns you want me to focus on, send them along with your manuscript and I will keep them in mind while reading.
