I will beta read your middle grade or young adult fantasy novel

5.0
5.0

United Kingdom

I speak English

7 orders completed

Professional developmental editor

Hi there! I'm Baldip, a developmental editor and author of The Heir of Skyport, a middle-grade fantasy novel. My speciality is in MG and young adult fantasy novels. I love working with writers to perf...
About this Gig

I do not use AI for any part of the beta reading process.


As a fellow middle grade author and beta reader with self-publishing experience, I know how valuable fresh eyes are when you're deep in your own story. I offer a thoughtful, in-depth beta read that highlights what's working and gently points out where improvements can help your story truly shine, particularly for children's books.


My feedback will cover:

  • Overall impressions of your story
  • Strength of characters and relationships
  • Plot and pacing issues
  • Worldbuilding consistency
  • Reader engagement and emotional impact
  • Target audience fit (especially for middle grade and young adult fantasy)
  • Proofreading


You will receive:

  • A custom feedback report with my thoughts about your book
  • Inline comments on your manuscript


MG and YA fantasy novels are unique in the way they inspire younger audiences. I will beta read your novel so that readers never want to put your book down. As a children's book specialist, I know what will resonate with the target market.


If your genre or target age demographic is different to the above, or if you're not sure that your story is ready for feedback, drop me a message!

Genre:

Children’s books

•

Fantasy

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

1 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(1)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • W

    wordpamela1

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    He has a deep understanding of middle grade fantasy and what makes readers tick. He is a true professional and is kind and generous to the author. I would hire him as he does what he says he will do and more.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

1 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(1)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • W

    wordpamela1

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    He has a deep understanding of middle grade fantasy and what makes readers tick. He is a true professional and is kind and generous to the author. I would hire him as he does what he says he will do and more.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No