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I will be your christian novel beta reader
I'm ready to analyze your novel
I love stories and helping writers. I pour my all into each manuscript. Beta reading is far more than just a freelance gig to me; reading and analyzing stories are what I look forward to most each day...
About this Gig
Greetings!
Writing a Christian novel for kids, teens, or adults? Having read hundreds of books since 1991 and holding a master's in theological studies, I bring deep genre expertise to your project.
Some beta readers are cheerleaders who shy away from hard truths. That's not me. Because if your story falls flat or has glaring weaknesses, you'll want to identify them.
Two characters fall in love but it feels lacking? You'll get that feedback. Your dialogue sounds like Grammarly Pro? I will point it out. Your finale flops? You'll want to fix it before readers post 1- and 2-star reviews.
However, if your story is out of this world and I lay in bed at night thinking about it, you'll certainly hear that too.
Here is a client review: "This is my third project working with Paul and I look forward to his insight above other beta readers. I have noticed a trend of hired beta readers using software to generate report responses, but it is clear in Paul's work that he reads, metabolizes, and gives personalized, detail-oriented feedback. I highly recommend his services."
I am waiting to hear from you and ready to get to work. Shoot me a message about your project.
Paul
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FAQ
Why should I choose you as my beta reader?
I am an experienced reader who considers the big picture and has an eye for detail. I provide honest feedback and offer suggestions to improve your manuscript.
What if I have more questions after you complete the job?
I will answer all of your questions until you are completely satisfied. As a writer, I understand the need for dialogue between writer and reader.
Do you accept longer manuscripts than 100,000 words?
Yes. Please contact me so that we can agree on a price and timeframe to complete the job.
How do you define in-line editing?
In-line editing is an assessment of flow and readability. I focus on transitions, tone, point of view, repetition, redundancies, and pacing. In-line editing is subjective, while copyediting is rule-based. Regardless, I will offer copyediting corrections to content that may need your attention.
Why did you start beta reading?
A former co-worker and friend wrote several manuscripts, and he let me read those so I could provide feedback. I was hooked (I love reading) and wanted to keep doing that for others.
Will you write an Amazon book review?
Amazon does not allow paid reviews. If they suspect your reviews are paid, they may delete your reviews, including legitmate reviews. At my discretion, I may write a review as an ARC, however it is not part of this gig nor its payment. So, no...this gig does not include writing an online review.
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kschweizer
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is my third project working with Paul and I look forward to his insight above other beta readers. I've noticed a trend of hired beta readers using software to generate beta report responses, but it's clear in Paul's work that he reads, metabolizes, and gives personalized, detail-oriented feedback. I highly recommend his services.
$50
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5 days
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Helpful?M 
matthewturgeon
United States
Ongoing collaborationThanks Paul for the honest feedback, I can tell you want this to be its best and didnt sugarcoat.
$50-$100
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4 days
Duration
Helpful?K kschweizer
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is my second time hiring Paul because his in-line notes were excellent. He exceeded expectations with a light proofread alongside kind and useful and specific beta feedback. Will absolutely hire again.
$50-$100
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6 days
Duration
Helpful?K kschweizer
United States
Ongoing collaborationPaul went above and beyond the standard beta reader expectations, with in-line comments, light proofreading and line editing, and a thorough reader report regarding everything from mood to character arc to story structure to its place in the current market. Paul's knowledge of theology, fiction, and...
$50-$100
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6 days
Duration
Helpful?M matthewturgeon
United States
Ongoing collaborationPaul was exceptional!
$50
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2 days
Duration
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K kschweizer
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is my third project working with Paul and I look forward to his insight above other beta readers. I've noticed a trend of hired beta readers using software to generate beta report responses, but it's clear in Paul's work that he reads, metabolizes, and gives personalized, detail-oriented feedback. I highly recommend his services.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M matthewturgeon
United States
Ongoing collaborationThanks Paul for the honest feedback, I can tell you want this to be its best and didnt sugarcoat.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?K kschweizer
United States
Ongoing collaborationThis is my second time hiring Paul because his in-line notes were excellent. He exceeded expectations with a light proofread alongside kind and useful and specific beta feedback. Will absolutely hire again.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?K kschweizer
United States
Ongoing collaborationPaul went above and beyond the standard beta reader expectations, with in-line comments, light proofreading and line editing, and a thorough reader report regarding everything from mood to character arc to story structure to its place in the current market. Paul's knowledge of theology, fiction, and...
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?M matthewturgeon
United States
Ongoing collaborationPaul was exceptional!
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?
