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I will read your fiction and non fiction novel and give critique
Empowering Authors, One Page at a Time
Your manuscript’s first fan and your schedule's best friend. I provide the honest, high-impact feedback your book deserves, focusing on emotional beats and structural integrity to turn "good" stories ...
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Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
last_encore
United States
Knows how deliver an intelligent and active review. It was obvious they engaged with the story and will have been an integral part in making this the best story it can be!
michael_khripin
Cyprus
I was surprised by the quality and speed. I liked our communication and the resulting delivery. Next time I will know who to hire. I recommend this service...
voicedbyshannon
United States
thanks for looking over this chapter and let me know that I need to adjust send structure and grammar to make the chapter more accessible to my audience. thank you
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going through this chapter and highlighting what I need to optimize I want to need to change to make the story flow better. thank you
voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for the insane this chapter and let me know what I need to slow down, break up, and make characters feel more about the events playing out. thank you
About this Gig
You've spent hours writing your manuscript, shaping your story, and bringing your ideas to life. Now you need to know one important thing before publishing: how will real readers experience your book?
I will beta read your manuscript and provide honest, thoughtful, and constructive reader feedback to help you strengthen your story before it reaches your audience. My goal is to help you see your work from a readers perspective while preserving your unique voice and writing style.
After reading your manuscript, you will receive a detailed reader report covering key elements such as plot flow, pacing, character development, dialogue, engagement, and overall reader experience. I will highlight what works well and suggest areas that could be improved to make your story even stronger.
I work with both fiction and non-fiction manuscripts and welcome most genres including romance, fantasy, mystery, thriller, sci-fi, and short stories.
Please note that this service focuses on beta reading and reader feedback, not full proofreading or editing. However, proofreading can be added as an extra if needed.
If your manuscript exceeds 50,000 words or requires a custom word count, Message ⬇️
Language:
English
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French
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German
Content Type:
Book
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Poetry
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Short story
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What exactly is your feedback style? Is it harsh?
I believe in "rigorous kindness." I won’t sugarcoat what isn’t working because I want your book to succeed, but I will never be cruel. My feedback focuses on the story’s needs, not personal preference. Think of me as your manuscript’s coach: I’m here to push you because I know your story can win.
Do you read all sub-genres of romance?
Yes! From "closed-door" sweet romance to high-heat contemporary, paranormal, or dark romance. I am comfortable with all spice levels. If your story has specific triggers or extremely niche themes, feel free to message me first to ensure we’re a good fit for one another.
Will you fix my grammar and typos?
As a beta reader, my focus is on the "big picture" pacing, character chemistry, and plot holes. While I will naturally flag glaring errors that pull me out of the story, this service is not a substitute for a final line edit or proofread. I’m here to make sure the heart of the story beats correctly.
What if I’m nervous about sharing my first draft?
Every best-seller started as a messy first draft! I treat every manuscript with total confidentiality and respect. My job isn't to judge your process; it’s to help you polish your gem until it shines. We are a team.
Can I ask follow-up questions after you deliver the report?
Absolutely. I don’t just "drop and run." If you need clarification on a specific note or want to brainstorm a quick fix for a plot hole I identified, I’m happy to chat.
Reviews
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last_encore
United States
Knows how deliver an intelligent and active review. It was obvious they engaged with the story and will have been an integral part in making this the best story it can be!
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?M michael_khripin
Cyprus
I was surprised by the quality and speed. I liked our communication and the resulting delivery. Next time I will know who to hire. I recommend this service for those who write fiction, fantasy and sci-fi. Both short and long form. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thanks for looking over this chapter and let me know that I need to adjust send structure and grammar to make the chapter more accessible to my audience. thank you
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going through this chapter and highlighting what I need to optimize I want to need to change to make the story flow better. thank you
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for the insane this chapter and let me know what I need to slow down, break up, and make characters feel more about the events playing out. thank you
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
19 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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L last_encore
United States
Knows how deliver an intelligent and active review. It was obvious they engaged with the story and will have been an integral part in making this the best story it can be!
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?M michael_khripin
Cyprus
I was surprised by the quality and speed. I liked our communication and the resulting delivery. Next time I will know who to hire. I recommend this service for those who write fiction, fantasy and sci-fi. Both short and long form. Thank you!
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thanks for looking over this chapter and let me know that I need to adjust send structure and grammar to make the chapter more accessible to my audience. thank you
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for going through this chapter and highlighting what I need to optimize I want to need to change to make the story flow better. thank you
$100-$200
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?V voicedbyshannon
United States
thank you for the insane this chapter and let me know what I need to slow down, break up, and make characters feel more about the events playing out. thank you
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
