I will beta read your lgbtq queer gay romance, short story or novel

Is your LGBTQ or fantasy manuscript emotionally authentic, engaging, and ready for readers? Before you publish, you need honest, thoughtful feedback from a real beta reader and alpha reader who understands storytelling, representation, pacing, and reader impact.

Hi, Im Liora, a professional alpha and beta reader with over 4 years of experience helping authors strengthen their manuscripts. I specialize in LGBTQ+, fantasy, romance, thriller, and historical fiction, providing detailed and constructive manuscript critique that improves story quality and reader engagement.

 I will provide insightful feedback on:

• Plot structure and pacing
• LGBTQ representation, authenticity, and sensitivity
• World-building, lore, and story logic
• Character development and emotional depth
• Dialogue, clarity, and narrative flow
• Consistency, plot holes, and reader immersion

Whether you need an LGBTQ beta reader, fantasy beta reader, or professional manuscript critique, I deliver honest, actionable insight, not generic or automated comments. My goal is to help you create a compelling, inclusive, and reader-ready manuscript that truly resonates with your audience.

Please send me a message before ordering!!!