I will read and give feedback on your cozy mystery plot outline

Have a cozy mystery idea but aren't sure if the plot actually works?

I'll read through your plot outline and provide detailed, practical feedback on the story before you spend weeks writing the manuscript.

What I'll look for:

Plot holes and inconsistencies

Pacing and story structure

Mystery setup and progression

Clues, red herrings and reveals

Suspect development and motives

Character motivations

Subplots and whether they support the main mystery

Areas where readers may become confused

Scenes or story beats that may be unnecessary

Places where the mystery could use more tension or development

Suggestions for strengthening the overall plot

If genre expectations are being met

What you'll receive:

Inline comments directly on your outline

A concise written report (1 to 2 pages) summarising my main observations

Practical suggestions for strengthening the story

Feedback focused specifically on the needs of a cozy mystery