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I will beta read your ya or fantasy manuscript for pacing and plot structure
Polishing plots, building worlds, hooking readers
I combine my B.A. in English, focusing on Creative Writing, from SUU with nearly 3 years of bookstore retail experience to help you shape unputdownable stories. My work spans published poetry, an arti...
About this Gig
Struggling with plot holes, a messy middle, or flat characters? Trusting someone with your rough draft is a big step. I'm here to make it a safe, exciting experience!
I hold a BA in Creative Writing and am a writer currently working on my own stories. I have 5 published poems across two literary magazines, and I co-write songs performed live. Living and breathing creative writing daily gives me the tools to help turn your raw idea into something unforgettable.
I focus entirely on friendly, constructive story coaching (developmental editing) for fiction, poetry, and short stories.
What We Will Smooth Out:
Plot & Flow: Finding gaps and keeping your pacing tight.
Character Growth: Ensuring your characters have clear motivations.
Rhythm & Voice: Using my songwriting background to make your prose shine.
What You Get: An encouraging editorial letter breaking down what works and what needs attention. I'll highlight your strengths, point out where pacing drops, and give practical, friendly rewrite suggestions along with supportive margin comments.
NOTE: This gig focuses purely on story structure. I do NOT offer grammar checks, typo corrections, or proofreading.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does the 1 revision in the Premium Package include?
It is strictly for a one-time round of text questions if you need help understanding my editorial notes. It does not include reviewing a rewritten draft or reading new material.
Do you edit grammar, typos, or spelling?
No, this gig is strictly for big-picture story coaching and structure. We will focus on plot holes, character arcs, and pacing. I do not do proofreading or line editing.
What file format should I send you?
I love working in Google Docs! You can share a Google Docs link or upload a Microsoft word file (.docx) If you send a google docs link, just make sure the sharing settings are set up to "Anyone with the link can comment" so I can leave my margin notes.
What genres do you specialize in?
I am open to almost all fiction genres, especially fantasy, young adult, sci-fi, romance, and thrillers. I am also highly experienced with poetry collections, short stories, and lyrical prose. If you aren't sure, feel free to message me!
