I will be your beta reader, romance beta reader and give book feedback

United States

I speak English, Spanish, Italian

Expert Literary Agent for Manuscript Representation, Publishing Strategy

I am a dedicated literary agent specializing in helping authors transform their manuscripts into market-ready works that attract publishers and readers alike. With a deep understanding of the publishi...
About this Gig

I'm your trusted manuscript beta reader, here to help you uncover what's not working in your story and show you exactly how to fix it.


Writing a novel isn't easy. You might feel stuck wondering why something feels off but can't quite pinpoint it. That's where I step in with honest, reader-focused feedback that solves real problems.


Here's how I help fix your story:


  • Struggling with weak chemistry? - I'll show you where the emotional connection falls flat and how to strengthen it
  • Unsure about pacing? - I'll point out slow or rushed sections and suggest improvements
  • Characters feel unrealistic? - I'll identify gaps in development and depth
  • The plot feels confusing? - I'll highlight plot holes and clarity issues
  • Not sure how readers will react? - I'll give genuine reader impressions and emotional responses
  • Worried your story isn't engaging enough? - I'll suggest ways to increase tension and keep readers hooked


Why work with me?

I focus on making your story stronger, more emotional, and more engaging for your target audience. My feedback is honest, supportive, and always aimed at helping you grow as a writer.


Send me a "message," and let's bring your book to life!

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Memoir/ biography

Philosophy

Romance

Language:

English

Italian

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