I will beta read your fantasy novel and give actionable feedback

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

274 orders completed

Gig Summary

Hi! I’m an avid reader and beta reader who loves getting lost in Adult and YA mystery, thriller, suspense, fantasy, and romance novels. Think of me as your honest, but supportive, reader friend! I’ll ...

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About this Gig

*Please Read Entire Description, Definitions, and FAQ's Before Ordering*


Do you need someone to beta read your novel? As a passionate fantasy reader and experienced beta reader, I will read your story and provide honest, actionable feedback to help you polish your manuscript before publication or querying.


I will Beta read your work and offer you a review on character development, plot holes/development, dialogue, overall readability, character development, and more. This will come in the form of a multi page reader report that delves deep into what works and what doesn't. In your order there will also be a space to provide specific question/areas that you would like me to address/review in my report.


It is my goal to help you bring your creativity to life with confidence! I will be your cheerleader with positive feedback, but, I will also be honest with constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement.



Packages:

  • Basic Short stories & samples (up to 30,000 words)
  • Standard Novellas (up to 65,000 words)
  • Premium Full-length or epic fantasy novels (up to 130,000 words)


Need something longer? Message me for a custom quote!

Genre:

Science fiction

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Fantasy

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

106 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(100)
(4)
(0)
(2)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    rogue_imagery

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna did an excellent job with my beta read, and this was my second time working with her. Just like the first time, her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and clearly based on a careful read of the full manuscript. She does a great job balancing what works with constructive, actionable suggestions on...

    $100-$200

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

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    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    altonbooth321

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna provided a thoughtful, detailed, and insightful beta-reading report for my manuscript, Monsters of Light: Return of Erebbadon. She demonstrated genuine engagement with the story, its characters, and the larger narrative. Her feedback highlighted important strengths while identifying areas where...

    $50-$100

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

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    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B
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    bill_heyman

    US

    United States

    5

    I think Bettina did an excellent job beta reading my manuscript. I found her feedback extremely valuable as I plan my next steps. Her grasp of what I was trying to accomplish in the story was far beyond what I expected, and the insights she shared will take my writing to the next level. I would strongly recommend her as a beta reader to anyone.

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

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    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R

    rogue_imagery

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna did a great job with my beta read. I could tell she actually took the time to pay attention to the story, characters, and how everything developed throughout the book. Her feedback was detailed and she pointed out both what she enjoyed and areas she thought could be improved, with clear examples...

    $200-$400

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jdkanuch

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna's review of my book was exactly what i was looking for. She delivered a report that had actual, actionable feedback, and showed that she paid attention to subtle shifts in time that even I as the author was unaware of. I would definitely work with her again and would recommend her to anyone looking for a beta reader of their fantasy fiction.

    $100-$200

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

106 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(100)
(4)
(0)
(2)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • R

    rogue_imagery

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna did an excellent job with my beta read, and this was my second time working with her. Just like the first time, her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and clearly based on a careful read of the full manuscript. She does a great job balancing what works with constructive, actionable suggestions on...

    $100-$200

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    altonbooth321

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna provided a thoughtful, detailed, and insightful beta-reading report for my manuscript, Monsters of Light: Return of Erebbadon. She demonstrated genuine engagement with the story, its characters, and the larger narrative. Her feedback highlighted important strengths while identifying areas where...

    $50-$100

    Price

    9 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B
    image-docs

    bill_heyman

    US

    United States

    5

    I think Bettina did an excellent job beta reading my manuscript. I found her feedback extremely valuable as I plan my next steps. Her grasp of what I was trying to accomplish in the story was far beyond what I expected, and the insights she shared will take my writing to the next level. I would strongly recommend her as a beta reader to anyone.

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R

    rogue_imagery

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna did a great job with my beta read. I could tell she actually took the time to pay attention to the story, characters, and how everything developed throughout the book. Her feedback was detailed and she pointed out both what she enjoyed and areas she thought could be improved, with clear examples...

    $200-$400

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jdkanuch

    US

    United States

    5

    Luna's review of my book was exactly what i was looking for. She delivered a report that had actual, actionable feedback, and showed that she paid attention to subtle shifts in time that even I as the author was unaware of. I would definitely work with her again and would recommend her to anyone looking for a beta reader of their fantasy fiction.

    $100-$200

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No