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I will beta read your mystery novel and give actionable feedback
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What people loved about this freelancer
ccflipz
United States
Luna's report on my manuscript was excellent. She was very detailed and thorough with my story and provided very detailed feedback. I got a full reader experience...
writermg
United States
I've worked with Luna before, and I can't stress enough how thorough, insightful, and detail-oriented her read and resulting report both are. I would highly...
mickeyglass
United States
This was really more of an alpha read and it more than met my hopes. Great reader, great insights, great advice and comments. I got specific and useful remarks...
About this Gig
*Please Read Entire Description, Definitions, and FAQ's Before Ordering*
Do you need someone to beta read your mystery novel? As a passionate mystery reader and experienced beta reader, I will read your story and provide honest, actionable feedback to help you polish your manuscript before publication or querying.
I will Beta read your work and offer you a review on character development, plot holes/development, dialogue, overall readability, character development, and more. This will come in the form of a multi page reader report that delves deep into what works and what doesn't. In your order there will also be a space to provide specific question/areas that you would like me to address/review in my report.
It is my goal to help you bring your creativity to life with confidence! I will be your cheerleader with positive feedback, but, I will also be honest with constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement.
Packages:
- Basic Short stories & samples (up to 30,000 words)
- Standard Novellas (up to 65,000 words)
- Premium Full-length novels (up to 130,000 words)
Need something longer? Message me for a custom quote!
Genre:
Mystery
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What kind of Beta Reader am I?
I can be considered somewhat of a tough love beta reader. My goal is to provide you, the author, an outside (critical) perspective of your work. If I love your work, I will tell you. However, if I have suggestions for improvement, I am not afraid to point it out to you.
Are you willing to negotiate prices?
In a way, yes. Prices can be negotiated based on timeline and word count. Bundles can also be done to lower the overall cost of your project.
What is Beta Reading?
A beta reader is usually a test reader of an unreleased work of literature or other writing, who gives feedback from the point of view of an average reader to the author. A beta reader is not a professional and can therefore provide advice and comments in the opinions of an average reader.
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26 reviews for this Gig
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ccflipz
United States
Luna's report on my manuscript was excellent. She was very detailed and thorough with my story and provided very detailed feedback. I got a full reader experience from her report and honest opinions of every bit of the story, including some suggestions for me to help tighten the prose. I'm beyond satisfied...
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?W writermg
United States
Ongoing collaborationI've worked with Luna before, and I can't stress enough how thorough, insightful, and detail-oriented her read and resulting report both are. I would highly recommend her and will definitely return for future reads.
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?M mickeyglass
United States
This was really more of an alpha read and it more than met my hopes. Great reader, great insights, great advice and comments. I got specific and useful remarks that will go directly into how I think about the next steps. Thanks Luna, great job.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?R rrlitch
United States
Ongoing collaborationFirstly, I want to say that Bettina's final report was EXCELLENT! She gave me an honest appraisal, highlighting the things she liked and detailing the areas where a little more work could bring the story in a little tighter. The cost was very small compared to the valuable insights she revealed. I...
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?R rcar0006
Malta
Great experience working with this seller. She delivered a very detailed reader report with extensive feedback that highlighted both the positives and negatives.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
26 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
C ccflipz
United States
Luna's report on my manuscript was excellent. She was very detailed and thorough with my story and provided very detailed feedback. I got a full reader experience from her report and honest opinions of every bit of the story, including some suggestions for me to help tighten the prose. I'm beyond satisfied...
$100-$200
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?W writermg
United States
Ongoing collaborationI've worked with Luna before, and I can't stress enough how thorough, insightful, and detail-oriented her read and resulting report both are. I would highly recommend her and will definitely return for future reads.
$50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?M mickeyglass
United States
This was really more of an alpha read and it more than met my hopes. Great reader, great insights, great advice and comments. I got specific and useful remarks that will go directly into how I think about the next steps. Thanks Luna, great job.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?R rrlitch
United States
Ongoing collaborationFirstly, I want to say that Bettina's final report was EXCELLENT! She gave me an honest appraisal, highlighting the things she liked and detailing the areas where a little more work could bring the story in a little tighter. The cost was very small compared to the valuable insights she revealed. I...
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?R rcar0006
Malta
Great experience working with this seller. She delivered a very detailed reader report with extensive feedback that highlighted both the positives and negatives.
$50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?
