I will beta read and critique your writing, with honest proofread

I will proofread and beta read your writing in a positive way while maintaining your original tone and style of writing.

What you get:

Overall reader impression

What hooked me and where I wanted to stop

Character feedback

Pacing notes

Biggest strengths & weaknesses

A reader report which will cover, but is not limited to, the following points:

Was your first chapter gripping enough to hold my attention?

Was anything confusing?

Were there moments where the story lagged?

What were some of my favourite parts?

Was the ending worth reading the whole book?

Any errors or inconsistencies?

How I work:

Google Docs or Word

Comments while reading + reader report after

Fiction only. Children's book, YA, Adult fiction.