I will review, proofread and analyze your script

I will read, and analyze your script getting back to you with a detailed feedback regarding:

• Overall
• Plot
• Dialogue
• Concept
• Characters
• Theme

The Feedback will be structured into 3 section:

1. Strengths
2. "Weaknesses"
3. Additional comments

The first section will be about the strong points of your script and will also include suggestions as how to use these "weapons" to make the impact we all want to see on the screen.

The second section will go through the weaknesses and those details that need to be reviewed, in order to have a solid script and no loopholes whatsoever. I will provide suggestions how to improve those, whether it's the characters, the dialogue, words choice etc.

Please note that I will not rewrite your script, but I may rewrite little pieces of dialogue or script to set the example of how the work can be improved and which direction you need to follow.

Finally, the third section, will contain specific comments as I read on things that stand out to me as they come.

For example :

(1) Int. Angel's house. I really like your descriptors; excellent action lines - try and pare them down- we don't need 4 paragraphs describing a kitchen. 2 max.

(1) indicates page number