I will developmental edit, line and copy edit, books for children

A thorough developmental edit looks at the big picture of your book, and the line and copy editing work completes the process. Let me know if you need dev.editing only. This package includes:

1. An editorial report of three to ten pages long, including an analysis of your book, recommendations for improvement, and ideas to improve the plot and turn the book into a bestseller.
2. Your manuscript with line editing, copyediting, and proofreading work.
3. Your manuscript with in-line comments, suggestions, and editorial feedback on the following:

• Plot, structure, Point of view, conflict
• Character development and consistency
• Style, literary devices, clarity, dialogue, pace, repetition
• Hooks, plot twists, novelty
• Avoiding pitfalls and maximizing your strengths
• Worldbuilding, setting, research
• Genre, word count, novelty
• Formatting review and recommendations
• Scene and chapter transitions, beginnings, and endings
• Ethics and sensitivity feedback on age, gender, social, cultural, historical, environmental, etc.
• Free feedback on illustrations and maps (if any)
• Free short Plan of Action to move forward

Message me if you only need Developmental Editing for a revised price.

Thank you!