I will developmental edit your novel, business, self help, book

A thorough developmental edit looks at the big picture of your book. This package includes:

1. An editorial report of three to ten pages long, including an analysis of your book, recommendations for improvement, and ideas to improve the plot and turn the book into a bestseller.
2. Your manuscript with in-line comments, suggestions, and editorial feedback on the following

• Plot, structure, PoV, conflict/s, hooks, plot twists, etc.
• Character development and consistency
• Title, character names, places, timeline, historical details
• Style, literary devices, clarity, dialogue, pace, repetition
• Avoiding pitfalls and maximising your strengths
• Setting, use of senses, and worldbuilding in fantasy or science fiction
• Genre, word count, novelty
• Scene and chapter transitions, beginnings and endings
• Ethics and sensitivity feedback on gender, age, social, cultural, historical, environmental, and other related aspects
• Free feedback on photos, illustrations, maps, etc.

Accepting all genres and book formats.