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I will proofread and critique your play or film script
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Indigenous Hawaiian, California-born VO artist/singer/actor/dancer based in Hawai'i. Bilingual English/Spanish. World traveler, Award-winning cook, a stickler for grammar, and a culinary adventurer.
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Need some fresh eyes on your draft that don't belong to your friends and family (who, let's face it, will probably love anything you do)?
I am a professional NYC actress with a BA in Theatre from UCI, and I have done countless scene studies and provided feedback for my writer friends over the years. I love seeing new projects, and I'm happy to give you a fresh perspective.
I also have annoyingly perfect grammar, if you need someone to crack that whip as well!
I am a professional NYC actress with a BA in Theatre from UCI, and I have done countless scene studies and provided feedback for my writer friends over the years. I love seeing new projects, and I'm happy to give you a fresh perspective.
I also have annoyingly perfect grammar, if you need someone to crack that whip as well!
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English
Content Type:
Articles/ blogs
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Film/TV scripts
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Other
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duke_windsor
United States
This was an excellent collaboration with Barrie, who was wonderful. She asked the right questions, gave excellent suggestions, and delivered exactly what my script needed to move forward to the next round of rewrites.
$50-$100
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2 days
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henryfeldman
United States
Thanks for the detailed analysis of my play. I found the comments ones that could I act on to make changes to the script. Though I said I didn't need grammar and spelling changes, she did them anyway and after looking over the list, I'm glad she did!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?A amirneus
Repeat Client
Israel
As happy as last time :)
Up to $50
Price
3 days
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Helpful?A amirneus
Repeat Client
Israel
Work fast and went into great details
Up to $50
Price
2 days
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Helpful?S snia_2024
Puerto Rico
Barrie Kealoha did an EXCELLENT job with my proofreading needs. Her attention to detail was outstanding, and her proactive communication and quick responsiveness made the process smooth. It was a very good job. Thanks so much!!! 👍
$50-$100
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3 days
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D duke_windsor
United States
This was an excellent collaboration with Barrie, who was wonderful. She asked the right questions, gave excellent suggestions, and delivered exactly what my script needed to move forward to the next round of rewrites.
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
B Seller's Response
Helpful?H henryfeldman
United States
Thanks for the detailed analysis of my play. I found the comments ones that could I act on to make changes to the script. Though I said I didn't need grammar and spelling changes, she did them anyway and after looking over the list, I'm glad she did!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?A amirneus
Repeat Client
Israel
As happy as last time :)
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?A amirneus
Repeat Client
Israel
Work fast and went into great details
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?S snia_2024
Puerto Rico
Barrie Kealoha did an EXCELLENT job with my proofreading needs. Her attention to detail was outstanding, and her proactive communication and quick responsiveness made the process smooth. It was a very good job. Thanks so much!!! 👍
$50-$100
Price
3 days
Duration
B Seller's Response
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