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I will developmental and line edit your fantasy or litrpg novel
Fantasy and LitRPG editor who tells you what's wrong and how to fix it
I've been editing for writers on Discord and Royal Road — the kind of authors who care about their craft and want feedback that's honest, specific, and useful.
I specialize in developmental and line e...
About this Gig
Story-focused developmental, line, and copyediting at $0.07/word not punctuation-only proofreading.
Start with the 1k test edit to see my process before committing to a full manuscript. Larger projects are broken into milestones you pay one section at a time and review each delivery before moving forward. No sticker shock, no risk.
Every issue includes:
- Original text
- Notes on what isn't working and why
- Suggestions on how to fix it
- Optional rewrite with suggestions applied
Feedback is delivered as a structured critique document, not inline edits. You'll understand not just what to change, but why.
Full-scope editing covering prose flow, dialogue, pacing, scene structure, show vs. tell, word choice, heavy punctuation correction is not included and is best handled at a dedicated proofreading stage.
Please message me before ordering above 1k so I can confirm availability and make sure your manuscript gets the time it deserves.
A free optional consultation call is included after delivery if you'd like to go over your feedback together. Just mention it in your requirements.
A full sample critique is available in the gallery below.
Language:
English
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Mystery
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Can you work with new or first-time authors?
Absolutely — I work with authors at every level. My critique format is designed to teach, not just fix, so you'll understand the reasoning behind every note and be able to apply it going forward.
Do I need to contact you before ordering?
For the 1k test edit, go ahead and order. For anything larger please message me first so I can confirm availability and make sure your manuscript gets the time it deserves.
Does the Test Edit count toward the full project?
Yes — the 1k test edit lets you see my process before committing. If you decide to continue, the cost is credited toward your full project price. The Test Edit allows both of us to confirm the project is a good fit before committing to a full manuscript.
What if I disagree with the feedback?
All feedback is a suggestion — you always have final say. If something doesn't land right we can talk it through. If you can defend a choice, that's usually a sign it should stay.
What genres do you work with?
I primarily work with fiction, especially fantasy, LitRPG, sci-fi, and character-driven stories. If you're unsure whether your project is a good fit, feel free to message me before ordering.
What file format should my manuscript be in?
I work with Word (.docx) and Google Docs. The only format I can't work with is PDF. Not sure if your format will work? Message me first and we'll figure it out.
Do you offer custom offers?
Yes — if your project falls between package sizes or you need a larger milestone-based plan for a full manuscript, message me first and I'll put together a custom offer that fits your project.
