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I will beta read your romance, fantasy, ya, or fiction manuscript
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Need feedback on your book before publishing? I'll read your story and give you my honest thoughts as a reader!
What I'll cover:
️ *Story flow & pacing
️ *Characters & dialogue
️ *Overall reader experience
I'm an author myself, so I know how helpful a second opinion can be! My feedback will be simple and easy to understand-no fancy editing terms, just a readers perspective.
How to get started:
Order directly for specified word counts. Longer manuscripts? Message me for a personalized offer.
Genres I love:
- Adult
- Erotica
- Fantasy
- Historical Fiction
- Horror
- Mystery
- New Adult
- Paranormal
- Romance/Dark
- Rom-Com
- Sci-Fi
- Taboo
- Young Adult
Questions? Drop me a message. Let's collaborate on your novella or manuscript for honest, objective feedback.
What I offer:
- Thorough manuscript reading.
- Inline comments for deeper engagement.
- Detailed report covering plot, dialogue, continuity, world-building, characters, opening, pacing, and readability.
Excited to work with you!
(Note: I only review FICTION manuscripts.)
Genre:
Fanfiction
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Mystery
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Romance
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Fantasy
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True crime
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Other
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What's your experience?
I took a number of creative writing courses in college and have been writing and doing simple edits since 2014. I've read many books in my life and enjoy beta reading.
Do you reject any genres or topics?
Yes, I do not read non-fiction. I will, however, read many taboo subjects. Just shoot me a message if you're unsure.
Does this gig include a grammar, proofreader, or spelling edit?
Yes and no... I will make in-line comments on grammatical/spelling errors if I catch them but I will not be openly looking for these errors as it isn't my main goal in this gig.
How will I receive my feedback?
I will provide a written document with my thoughts and leave comments directly on your manuscript.
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Taiwan
Louise provided detailed and helpful feedback throughout the novella. I especially appreciated her insights on character chemistry, pacing, and emotional flow. Highly recommended!
$50-$100
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grek007
Georgia
She did her job very quickly and efficiently, I recommend it. I will contact you again in the future.
$50
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4 days
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C christine_sj
Taiwan
Louise provided detailed and helpful feedback throughout the novella. I especially appreciated her insights on character chemistry, pacing, and emotional flow. Highly recommended!
$50-$100
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2 days
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Georgia
She did her job very quickly and efficiently, I recommend it. I will contact you again in the future.
$50
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4 days
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