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I will critique your manuscript and give honest feedback on plot, characters and pacing
About this Gig
Wondering what is working in your story and what may be holding it back?
I'll critique your manuscript and give you honest, reader-focused feedback on the areas that matter most to your story.
I'll look at:
- Plot and story structure
- Character development and motivations
- Pacing and story flow
- Conflict and stakes
- Reader engagement
- Dialogue and emotional impact
- Beginning, middle, and ending
- Scenes that feel rushed, slow, repetitive, or unnecessary
- Areas that may need more development or clarity
My goal is not to rewrite your story or change your voice. Ill look at your manuscript as a reader and give you a clear outside perspective on what is working, what may be confusing, and where the story could become stronger.
Whether you have a novel, novella, short fiction, or unfinished manuscript, Ill provide thoughtful feedback based on the scope of your package.
Have a manuscript longer than my packages? Send me a message with the word count before ordering, and we can work out the right option for you.
Send me your manuscript and lets take a closer look at your story.
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does your manuscript critique include?
I’ll evaluate your plot, characters, pacing, structure, conflict, reader engagement, dialogue, emotional impact, and overall story flow.
Is this the same as proofreading or editing?
No. This is a big-picture story critique. I’ll give honest feedback on what works and what could be stronger rather than correcting every grammar or spelling mistake.
What types of manuscripts can you critique?
I can critique novels, novellas, short fiction, and unfinished manuscripts across different fiction genres.
Will you rewrite or change my story?
No. I’ll respect your writing style and voice. My role is to provide an honest outside perspective and point out areas that may need more clarity, development, or improvement.
My manuscript is longer than your packages. Can you still critique it?
Yes. If your manuscript is longer than the word count in my packages, please send me a message with the word count before ordering so we can arrange the right option for your project.
